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Author Topic: Vol. 03 : Ali  (Read 9733 times)

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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #15 on: April 26, 2010, 11:35:01 PM »
I disagree, its cool!

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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #16 on: April 26, 2010, 11:44:58 PM »
I disagree, its cool!
I agree with Doodler's disagreeing. Yes, I love the shadingand design, it's awesome!

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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #17 on: April 27, 2010, 03:47:44 AM »
what do you disagree?
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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #18 on: April 27, 2010, 08:01:38 AM »
This is AMAZING work. Nice line art, and the plot really appeals to my love of sci-fi.

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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #19 on: April 27, 2010, 12:40:14 PM »
what do you disagree?

Iiiiii gotta ask the same question doodler LOL What do you disagree with haha.

Thanks Lego ^__^ I've changed the story a tad as far as the Villian's motive but I won't bother to edit it. Im glad u like the line work. XD

Rough sketch of inside of Ali ship.


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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #20 on: April 27, 2010, 01:16:26 PM »
Lol, I was disagreeing with your opinion that the canyon thing was bland ^^ and nice work here too!

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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #21 on: April 27, 2010, 10:36:07 PM »

wow I love sci-fi too,,  :D
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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #22 on: April 27, 2010, 10:47:20 PM »
It's looking pretty cache! it kinda reminds me of Lilo & Stitch xP (maybe because of the rounded edges perhaps?)

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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #23 on: April 27, 2010, 11:54:15 PM »
You, my good sir, have talent. =)
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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #24 on: April 28, 2010, 12:41:41 PM »
I'm writing the first bits o dialogue for the story so hopefully actual page sketches shouldnt be far behind.

Woo! Thanks everyone!
@monsterful I actually didn't think of lilo and stitch but now that you mention it I think I'll look at it!  pull some influence from the ships and stuff. XD.

@Doodler hmmm i THINK i'll prob still try and  like I dunno do something to actually characterize that canyon it just Doesn't scream anything toward me but I have an idea.

and Thanks Sai LOL.

Uh I did a sketch of what I wanted her blaster to look like. The top area of it is from an old bone gun her dad had she just had it modified around the bottom for the matter manipulator and the energy clip. I think I'll stick with it cause it looks pretty heavy like I envisioned.

Also I think ultimately i make make Ali's fashion cuter or a little more girly shes pretty thick right now lol.


Sketch of other 2 crew members. I actually thought itd be a neat idea if the crew were the councils children that way they could all be trained as they grew up together so. I think I'll run with it.
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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #25 on: April 28, 2010, 01:21:18 PM »
I love your stuff and its all looking really cool! As fo rthe canyon, its your choice all the way! I cant wait to see what you come up with!

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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #26 on: April 29, 2010, 02:34:09 PM »
I think I just might have an idea to make that canyon more unique. But well see how it develops i just started writing the dialogue and doing frame planning so hopefully i'll be throwin up some development sketches
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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #27 on: April 29, 2010, 03:32:15 PM »
I cant wait to see them ^^

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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #28 on: April 30, 2010, 03:46:34 PM »
So I did some sketches in my journal of the Canyon. I think I'm gonna go with this. I have a neat little battle scene set up for Baibus and Ali as they fall toward the core.

Sorry its sorta messy just scanned it right from the journal.



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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #29 on: April 30, 2010, 05:12:48 PM »
cool journal ^^ thats a way better idea than your first one XD