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Vol. 03 : Ali
« on: April 16, 2010, 01:45:10 PM »
Ok So I decided to use an idea i had put on hold for a while. And

Here are the first draft revamps of the main character I'll be posting other designs for creature and level pretty soon. Since the deadline is not TOO far away lol.


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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #1 on: April 16, 2010, 01:48:27 PM »
nice art as always. whats the story going to be about?

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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #2 on: April 16, 2010, 11:01:45 PM »
What kinda creature is that ? Hope to see the plot line soon. xD

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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #3 on: April 18, 2010, 07:33:19 PM »
I agree, I cant wait to see more!

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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #4 on: April 21, 2010, 04:02:12 PM »
Sorry for the delayed response guys ^__^ i swear I'll love the day my life turns right side up/

The Story in as few words as possible is about Ali. Because her family is a special breed among aliens they were givin the duty to guard over the convict beast of the galaxies on a locked planet called Latch. In an attempt to escape his duty Ali's father weaken the locked to so that he and his family could leave but instead caused it to break releasing all of them. In an attempt to recapture all the beast over time Her family dies and when shes 6 her father dies, so she bears the burden of cleaning up the family mess. THIS story in particular for the anthology is about the chase after the beast known as Baibus, he eats the heart of planets and is responsible for killing Ali's dad.

Sketch of one of the little portable bikes.

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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #5 on: April 22, 2010, 11:47:49 PM »
thats AWESOME!!!!

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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #6 on: April 24, 2010, 08:42:24 AM »
wow nice plot, Im interested because I like aliens and like to meet one of them :D
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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #7 on: April 25, 2010, 08:45:10 PM »
Thanks guys! Uh honestly coming up with aliens isss fun but i'm gonna try and keep the designs in the box since we're on a time limit. I'm excited to see everyones!

Here are some sketches I did earlier todaysince i'm feelin sorta better. Some shots of alis best friend the council leader, baibus and the ship they take.


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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #8 on: April 25, 2010, 11:18:55 PM »
oooooooooooooooooooooo, Im liking the whole design of this cache! well done!

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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #9 on: April 26, 2010, 08:33:47 AM »
thanks doodler I'll try to get some environment sketches done and maybe some prop designs.  Get everything at a steady look before I start.
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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #10 on: April 26, 2010, 01:12:39 PM »
K so I finished all the council members today so here are the other 4.


rough Sketch of council room tryin to lay it out.
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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #11 on: April 26, 2010, 06:49:12 PM »
I wanna be a cuncil member, jsut os I could chill in tha troom ^^ nice work cache!

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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #12 on: April 26, 2010, 07:01:26 PM »
I wouldn't want to be a council member. That table isn't big enough and it isn't round. xD

I love how your characters are really fleshed out.
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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #13 on: April 26, 2010, 09:35:57 PM »
ohh council member..
and ALIENS really greatr design
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Re: Vol. 03 : Ali
« Reply #14 on: April 26, 2010, 10:58:15 PM »
Thanks guys. Lol Yeah Sai the table came out abnormal in the sketch its all good though it'll be fixed. It wont be round but itll e fixed. LOL .

Yay another rough sketch of one of the portable ships theyll use on the planet.


A concept sketch of the core entrance. mmmmmm itll most likely change or major develope its pretty bland right now.

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