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Author Topic: [ISSUE 3]- Doodler's Manga  (Read 19709 times)

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Re: [ISSUE 3]- Doodler's Manga
« Reply #120 on: May 27, 2010, 10:20:50 AM »
Such nice perspectives. Its good to see this chapter done, it reads nicely! Awesom

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Re: [ISSUE 3]- Doodler's Manga
« Reply #121 on: May 27, 2010, 10:04:26 PM »
thx lego :D much appreciated ^^

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Re: [ISSUE 3]- Doodler's Manga
« Reply #122 on: May 28, 2010, 02:03:15 AM »
gosh~ that was nice :D
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Re: [ISSUE 3]- Doodler's Manga
« Reply #123 on: May 28, 2010, 11:20:17 AM »
merci ABC ^^

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Re: [ISSUE 3]- Doodler's Manga
« Reply #124 on: June 11, 2010, 04:39:37 AM »
*pant pant pant*

seriously, I love this story....but its truly testing my limits as an artist and my patience @_@ anyway, Im working on inking and gray-scaling.... heres 5/9 for now:











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Re: [ISSUE 3]- Doodler's Manga
« Reply #125 on: June 11, 2010, 05:51:07 AM »
wow...




nice job doodle these look amazing!!!

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Re: [ISSUE 3]- Doodler's Manga
« Reply #126 on: June 11, 2010, 08:25:59 AM »
I see why this is pushing your limits, the clean up is VERY awesome. And now you can clearly see the space defined around them. The establishing shots are good and I'd actually enjoy reading this whole thing. The only issue I had was with the speech balloons and the Onomatopoeias. The speech bubbles try and use tools that keep the edges as sharp and straight as possible, the cleaner the thought and speech bubbles the more professional the look. And the onomatopoeias  if you have photoshop or illustrator or anything make those with actual font instead of by hand.

Other than that with all the grays and such you put in this is really awesome!
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Re: [ISSUE 3]- Doodler's Manga
« Reply #127 on: June 11, 2010, 12:54:53 PM »
your inking seems to be getting better. one question and a spelling error though. on page two you say "keeping peace here in nyre" but isnt the city called briggs? and then on page four in the second bubble you use teh instead of the

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Re: [ISSUE 3]- Doodler's Manga
« Reply #128 on: June 11, 2010, 02:31:50 PM »
Looks pretty good.  :D
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Re: [ISSUE 3]- Doodler's Manga
« Reply #129 on: June 11, 2010, 02:40:35 PM »
@ aero: glad you approve XD cant wait to work with Chimera with those too ^^

@ Cache: again, very high praise! thank you so much ^^ As for your two critiques: its too late for either one at this point, as I've already finished inking and this is a great time consumer as is...however I agree with your points and will try to accomplish some new goals next round :DD thanks again ^^

@coryn:thanks XD! AS for your question, Nyre is the country Rayne lives in and Briggs is one city within Nyre. MGS is responsible for the whole country, not just Briggs ^^ And curses!! The tehs will never leave me XDD

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Re: [ISSUE 3]- Doodler's Manga
« Reply #130 on: June 12, 2010, 01:29:19 PM »
really awesome work doodler! it's REALLY nice, the inking the backgrounds, everything. Are you use any digital program for painting grays and such? Cuz it would be better for you to use some vector tools for the balloons and text effects, they will pop out more that way.

EDIT: just read your post up, forget what I said xD

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Re: [ISSUE 3]- Doodler's Manga
« Reply #131 on: June 24, 2010, 02:50:44 AM »
OK, THE WHOLE, COMPLETED THING!!



















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Re: [ISSUE 3]- Doodler's Manga
« Reply #132 on: June 24, 2010, 06:03:14 AM »
Awesome story, and cool drawings! I'd love to read more of this!
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Re: [ISSUE 3]- Doodler's Manga
« Reply #133 on: June 24, 2010, 12:47:15 PM »
Nice work on the shading Doodler, I already said anything I wanted to about the story before (I think). :hmm:
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Re: [ISSUE 3]- Doodler's Manga
« Reply #134 on: June 24, 2010, 01:55:37 PM »
good work doodle!

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