[ISSUE 3] kinre story

[kinre]

here first page for my story. well i didn't want to post anything until is done but seen  Hasith say update our story and so here got only 1 pic. just to say this pic is not done and i will need to change alot thing, and that why i will post this pic.

i have 8 page now so still got 12 page to draw so i think i can done it in time. and i don't think i will update anything .

[SaiHawkeye]

Looks like your manga will be interesting. I can't wait to see the finished work.

[Fallen Kite]

But (!) it has some grammar errors  I suggest you send the pages to one for correction :3 When you're finished

[Coryn]

artwork is good but yeah you're grammar is pretty atrocious. i would suggest getting one of the writers on the forum to give it a once over to help you out

[kinre]

i know i know my english suck and don't worry i already got ppl can edit it .

and this page is not done, alot of thing have to redo.

[Fnnenn Enninn]

Grammar is poor, but I can understand it fine, you talk like I did for about a year and a half. Or two years can't remember....

[animeABC]

i can't see the letters then I found a way how to read it and it is nice kinre! and also thanks for joining in my site !
nice and I hope you'll post other chapters soon

[Hasith]

Anthology gallery one reason for correcting errors in your submissions. More like proof reading. So kinre, Though u don't think you wouldn't update, you ll need to update if you want to make sure everything is correct in your submission.

After all you wouldn't want to find grammar, spelling or any other mistakes after publishing the Anthology, would you ? xD.

[animeABC]

  they have said you have poor grammar but it is OKAY cause we understand it even a little

[Hasith]

Well most of us here are not native English speakers so its ok to have grammar mistakes. But It's important to get them correct when we publish the story. So posting here pages is one good way to get them corrected. Also others should point out which mistakes they see. no point just telling there are mistakes.

[Fnnenn Enninn]

I'm Canadian, I only speak english, but I understand it fine, thanks to spending so much time with my old guild xD

Anyway, it does look interesting, I hope to see more ^^

[kinre]

now still got 2month until the date line, and still got alot of thing need to be draw/ design.
this story have nothing much to do about the first page the first page well can say just test my skill, although will still use it to make thing more fun.

and for sumi, old guild? spending so much time?
for hasith, i know is good to let other see if got mistakes or not  but i think is best to let other don't know anything befor is done, so thing will be fun. and i think it is my job as the 1 who make the story to ensure every mistakes is corrected, with out letting other ppl know the story. i already ready ppl to edit it when i done.

[Fnnenn Enninn]

By old guild, I played an online game, and everyone in my Guild, besides the Leader who was from Holland, and me, everyone was from Singapore/Malaysia. They're grammar was very similar to yours.

But that was a while ago, and I'm a little rusty.

Hopefully you do well with this project ^^ Best of luck.

[kinre]

oh i see
thank

[Hasith]

Main reason posting here, we want to know if the story is really happening or not. There were member who wanted to submit stories last 2 volumes but members or their stories were no where to be found at end when we collect files to be send to publisher. This complicate things for us when we deal with formatting the anthology.
So basically this time we are going to check who really doing a story see how to many has done update their topics so we ll know for sure their submissions will be there at end of deadline. Those submission will get priority time because we know these will be ready for us to format.

if you want to get proof reading done or not is your choice. It's your story so its your glory. But After we format the book and submit to publisher, nothing can be changed if there are mistakes or not. You don't have to post all pages but need to post few pages here like 1 page then a month before deadline one of later pages etc.