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Offline Lady112

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So What do you guys think?
« on: February 13, 2008, 09:19:56 PM »
Here is a pic I drew the image draws from a pic I have in one of my "How to express Emotions in Manga Characters" book. Any info on how I can improve? Need helpful criticism...

« Last Edit: February 13, 2008, 09:53:45 PM by Hasith »

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Re: What say you?
« Reply #1 on: February 13, 2008, 11:05:07 PM »
you did a good job on it, I cant really draw so I cant say anything about it

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Re: What say you?
« Reply #2 on: February 13, 2008, 11:08:09 PM »
Its a great work. I would like to see the colored version too. And Also more of your drawings !

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Re: What say you?
« Reply #3 on: February 13, 2008, 11:09:28 PM »
yea more drawings would be nice

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Re: What say you?
« Reply #4 on: February 13, 2008, 11:59:21 PM »
yes keep working on it!
it looks wonderful!

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Re: What say you?
« Reply #5 on: February 14, 2008, 09:39:08 AM »
aaa i have the same book lol
it's very precise and useful!
good job!

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Re: What say you?
« Reply #6 on: February 17, 2008, 09:06:00 PM »
it's good. she's adorable. keep it up and post more!!! :D
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Re: What say you?
« Reply #7 on: February 22, 2008, 10:42:11 PM »
Very nice,your detail is wonderful.
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Re: What say you?
« Reply #8 on: March 05, 2008, 07:03:51 PM »
Great! I'd like to see somthing similar with more eyebrow placement, though. Those things seem kinda static in that picture.

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So What do you guys think?
« Reply #9 on: March 29, 2008, 03:14:34 AM »
Sorry it took soooo long for me to submit this but Ive been super busy wirh work and school!

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Re: So What do you guys think?
« Reply #10 on: March 29, 2008, 10:39:49 AM »
Thanks for the advice and compliments everyone! :D

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Re: So What do you guys think?
« Reply #11 on: March 29, 2008, 10:58:46 AM »
Hi Lady112 Good to see you back after a while. by the way it would be better if you had upload it to photobucket and post here. sometimes some members are unable to view them when post this way. Anyway great work ! hope to see more !

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Its been a while...here is a quick doodle...
« Reply #12 on: April 11, 2008, 02:38:27 PM »

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And I finally added color...
« Reply #13 on: April 11, 2008, 02:40:10 PM »
This one I colored using manga studio the other one of the red head I used just pencil crayons





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Re: And I finally added color...
« Reply #14 on: April 11, 2008, 03:27:46 PM »
OH i like it!!!!!!!!
Not that i'm Mr.Know-It-All but maybe if you added some more colour to the skin!!!!!!
but other than that its a great pic!!!!!!!!
Can't wait to see more colored or otherwise!!!!!!!!!!!