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« Reply #45 on: July 23, 2010, 03:22:26 AM »

The prologue for Translated will be appearing in the upcoming Writers Anthology, so I felt I'd post here to let everyone know.
Also: SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!
Now that, that's cleared up, I cleaned up the Prologue today and fixed type-o's, which was made even easier by Lego's review and it's handy timing. I ran it through some spell checkers online to catch any other errors that slipped through.
One big thing is that, I hope to be able to "translate" (buh dum tish) it to novel form for the Anthology.

Also, more SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!
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« Reply #46 on: July 23, 2010, 03:25:41 AM »

heheh

well it looks like theres more for me to read... man it jsut never ends T-T
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« Reply #47 on: July 23, 2010, 07:43:48 AM »

haha, i feel sorry for you aero, but not to the extent that i'll let you off the hook on at least skimming through mine!

glad it helped, Sumi, and its looking good :]
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« Reply #48 on: July 23, 2010, 09:17:20 AM »

I'm glad that you kind of built on Edward's secret...One thing that always disappoints me is when a story whips a character twist out of the blue. It's nice when all of those mysteries build a wall...and then a truck (twist/solution) rams through it.
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« Reply #49 on: July 23, 2010, 09:27:48 AM »

Haha, nice metaphor, yea I hate that too, it's just such a flow breaker, but it's really impressive when a story can leave hints that you don't quite pick up on immediately, and can always look back and say "OOoooh that was clever!"
I'm just glad that it worked out, and the reader could pick up that he was a mysterious character.
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« Reply #50 on: July 30, 2010, 01:54:39 AM »

Well, Litt brought it up tonight and someone said it before. And frankly it's been bugging me as well, the elationship between Sumi and Lucy moved a bit fast.

I think I'll be changing chapters, finally adding long awaited spell checking. I'm hoping to fix them up so they make more sense, and change some inaccuracies.
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« Reply #51 on: August 01, 2010, 03:06:53 PM »

OK, got around to the first two chapters.
Jeez, I've been so busy, alright now to get those fixed on the site, and off to finish other writing.
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« Reply #52 on: August 01, 2010, 03:19:27 PM »

How does Translated stand, as of now?
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« Reply #53 on: August 01, 2010, 03:23:36 PM »

Five chapters
Two up to date
Three to be edited

And six is in the oven.
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« Reply #54 on: August 18, 2010, 11:55:31 AM »

Here's Six it's sorta long I think.

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CHAPTER 6

   Edward: Useless inhumane powerless boy, couldn't even save your friend. Just as useless as your previous life, never saved anyone there either.
Sumi: Shut up! *Draws his bow*
Edward: *Beats it from his hand, grabs him by the neck* Powerless, too powerless for me to even bother with. I'll let your friends do it for me. Hehehehe... *Throws Sumi, floats back*

A dead Leif stood, a sword still protruding from his shoulder, dead eyes with no glow, and gray complexion.
Leif: Bastard, you couldn't run faster? No way you could make it there before I was mortally wounded? You didn't even try, you only wanted to be a hero. Show Lucy that you were brave, too bad, it didn't work, you just ended up being just another guy, no hero.
Sumi: No! I tried! I did, I tried as hard as I could, it wasn't to be a hero, it was to protect you!
Leif: I'll believe it when your limp body sits next to mine in hell.
Leif runs forward with a rock.
Sumi's body won't react, he's immoble.
Leif forces the rock into his mouth, gagging him.
Sumi was choking, unable to breath, warm blood trickling down his gullet, tickling his throat as if to taunt him. He fell over, suffocated.

   The cart hit a nasty bump.
Sumi: *Flings himself to a sitting position. Reaches into his mouth* Ugh! No rock.... *breaths heavily* Damn it...
Thomas: *Wakes up violently* Whats wrong?
Sumi: Nightmare, it was so realistic.
Thomas: Thats what you get for missing the night's sleep. After such a day.
Sumi: Damn it all.... How do I tell the family?
Thomas: Don't worry, you won't be alone, I'll be there too. I'm sorry about last night.. I wasn't myself.
Sumi: It's no problem, I understand.
Thomas: Mmhm... Think you should try to get more rest?
Sumi: I really should, but I don't think I can. I'll stay awake, it's no problem.
Thomas: Don't hesitate to sleep if you can.
Sumi: I won't, I promise.
For the remainder of the ride, about 6 hours, Sumi found no chance to sleep, and stayed awake.

   (After the ride)
The boys stood in their home town's square, a breeze blew past, the silence was mournful.
Thomas:There's no one here...
Sumi: They're all expecting us tomorrow, not today. I'm surprised we could leave.
Thomas: I am too, I never thought that they would just let us go after that surprise attack.
Sumi: No. Seems strange, but I guess they made the promise that we would only serve one fight.

The two young men stood with 6 others. 8 of the original 12 that left the village had returned. The rest staying to fight. The two boys looked down the path to Leif's house. Reluctantly they began to walk, equipment hung on their sides, wearing the coats they were given. Thomas carried Leif's Masamune in his hands. On the way they stopped into Sumi's house to drop off their equipment, except for the Masamune, which they intended to deliever to Leo. They walked to the door step, slowly, fighting with each step their instinct to retreat.

Thomas: Will you knock?
Sumi: ...Sure. *Pulls the knocker up, and drops it onto the wooden door.*
Leo: *through door* Comeon' in!

Sumi reached out a twisted the knob slowly, hesitating at first, not wanting to continue, every muscle screaming to stop. The door creaked slowly open, and Thomas stepped inside.

Thomas: *Looking back* Come on, we can't delay any longer.
Sumi: Hm. *Steps inside, head down*

Leo: Boys, your back early, what's the cause. Where's my son?
The boys kept their heads down, neither could manage words.
Leo:.....
Thomas: We were attacked early, they let us leave due to it.
Leo: And so where is Leif.
Sumi: *Passes Leo the Masamune* There was nothing anyone could do.
Leo:... *He hung his head* Lucy is out with the hunter gatherer group that left this morning. When she returns tonight I'll inform her. You boys get some rest..
Leo did his best to be a responsible adult, but sounded weak and all the colour had drained from his face. He gripped the hand rail of the stairs and turned away from the boys. Sumi and Thomas instantly knew that their job was done and they left. They reached Sumi's house, and sat down in the living room.
Thomas: He doesn't look well. He's old now, that blow might be enough to break him. Poor man.
Sumi: He's almost a father to me, I hate to see him like that. After the hunter gatherer group returns tonight I'll go by and see how they are doing.
Thomas: I'll have my fair share to do, I have to tell my parents about Leif. And we should probably go tell Al that we're back.
The thought struck Sumi hard.
Sumi: Al! Do you think he knows about Ed?
Thomas: I have no clue, but your right, we have to go see if he knows anything.

   The boys rushed into town to find Al's house. When they passed the square they noticed that the general shop was closed, and no one was inside. They reached the house and knocked on the door. Al opened, he looked downcast, but cheered up a bit when he noticed it was his two friends who had come by.
Al: When did you two get here? Come in, sit down.
The two explained what had happened in the field. They exculded any mention of Ed and replaced him with a sorcerrer. When Al heard what had happened to Leif he became even more upset than he had been when he answered the door.
Al: I can't believe it... It's way to outlandish.
Thomas: It's true. And it seems that in the days we've been gone some things have happened here. Would you mind filling us in?
Al: Ed's missing. We don't know what happened, he vanished in the night the same day everyone left for the war.
Sumi cast a look at Thomas as if to say "Should we mention Ed?". Thomas caught on and sent back a look of "Not quite yet".
Sumi: I'm really sorry. You haven't heard anything of his whereabouts?
Al: No, it's all so strange. Any one the village sends out the look around comes back with nothing. There's no clues to him at all. Like he dissapeared or flew away.
Sumi looked out the window. It had grown dark since they started talking. But there was something else as well. The wind was powerful outside, trees were blowing around and leafs were being ripped from branches. But even with the wind the stars were invisible behind the stoic clouds. Suddenly the window pane blew open, smashing against the wall and a foggy breeze ripped through the sitting area where the boys were.
Thomas: What's with wind?
Sumi: That isn't ordinary wind!
Thomas: I agree, come!
The three boys jumped up from their seats and ran into the gale. When they went out side they could see much clearer what was happening. In the centre of town a group of cloaked figures were walking through, a black trail behind them. They glided past the square and started on to the road to Sumi's and Leo's houses.
Thomas: I'll go to the bell tower at the church and raise the alarm, I don't know what this is but I think they're after something.
Sumi: You think 'he' could be in there?
Thomas: I don't know, but it's likely. You two go ahead of them beat them to their destination. Go!

   Thomas ran to the church's bell tower. Al and Sumi ran through yards and gardens and made it ahead of the dark procession.
Sumi: A quick stop at my place, we need to pick up our weapons. You take Thomas'.
Al: Alright.
The party stopped quickly and grabbed their weapons. Sumi took his bow and dagger (he had recovered it from the battlefield) but had no quiver or arrows. Al took the sword and shield, but found the shield too heavy, and could only manage the sword. The two took the back door to stay off the main road, and turned around for an instant to look at what was behind them. The dark cloud from the procession was nearly at Sumi's house, and behind that cloud flames were growing from buildings everywhere. The town was on fire.
Sumi: Hurry!
The two leaped the fence behind Sumi's house and ran double time to alert Lucy and Leo.

   Thomas reached the Church and leaped the front steps three at a time and threw himself at the door. It was locked, and he couldn't push through the thick wood. He scanned the building for a second, then decided to go in through the window. He lifted a rock and tossed it at the window smashing the stained glass. Then clambered up and in himself. He landed in the darkened church. It was pitch black and he couldn't see anything, excpect the gimmer of the altar at the front. All of a sudden the stain glass windows started to cast a bit of cloured light into the Church. Thomas looked back outside and saw the source of the light. The town was ablaze with strong vibrant flame.
He was a bit stunned for a second, then recovered,
Thomas: No, I have to hurry!
Thomas threw himself up and ran whatever he could through an alisle of pews to the centre of the church. He turned right to head to the front of the building. He stopped at the altar and looked down. The Priest who took care of the church was lying on the ground. His white robes stained dark red with his own blood. His cerimonial dagger at his side, next to his twisted broken arm. The only sign of a struggle was in the immediate area of the Priest. Thomas sobbered up from the shock of the sight and ran around the Priest, muttering a quick prayer. He reached the back of the altar and ran left into a door with a stair case. The stair case led to a tower, and at the top was a bell. Thomas hopped the steps in the same fashion as before and grabbed the bell string. Before he could ring it he was tripped from behind and released the cord. He fell on his face and flipped around to see two robbed figures floating side by side at the stair entrance, the only part of them that was visible was their glowing smiles. The boy looked around for something to defend himself with and saw only a wood cutting axe leaned against a window sile. He scrambled back on his hands and feet to the window behind him, grabbed the axe and stood in a fighting stance.
Thomas: *Panting*
Figures:Hehehe....
The right figure raised his right hand and the left figure raised his left hand and from the shadows formed three humanoid figures, who lunged for Thomas one by one. Thomas slashed downward and the first then across at the second, and finally taking the third and flipping it out the window behind him. He faced the two cloaked figures who's smiles didn't fade, and only grew more evil. He ran ahead with the axe down at his side, ready to swing and slashed at the figures.
The right figure grabbed the axe in his hand, without it cutting the hand in half, but blood trickling own his palm and onto his wrist. He twisted the axe from his hand and dropped it down the stairs behind him. He held his bleeding hand to his mouth and licked away from blood, more coming out after, and his sinister smile not dissapearing. The left figure flew at Thomas before he could react, pinned him to the window sile and grabbed his arms.
Thomas: NOOOOOOOO- *His scream was muffled*

Sumi and Al ran into Leo's house from the front door. Leo was inside in the hallway running down the stairs with a broadsword. He stopped his charge when he noticed it was just he boys.
Leo: What are you two still doing out! Get inside, now!
The boys slammed the door behind them and bolted it shut, Leo rammed a chair into the knob the stop it from opening even further.
Leo: Get into the smithy! There's a shelter there you can hide in!
Sumi: Where's Lucy?
Leo: When I told her about Leif she ran into her room and she hasn't come out.
Sumi: You two go to the shelter then.
Before anyone could stop him Sumi ran up the steps and knocked on Lucy's door. There was no response.
Sumi: Lucy! There's no time we need to get you some where safe!
There was still no response.
Sumi: Lucy! Comeon! If you don't answer I'm coming in to get you!
There was still no answer, so Sumi slung the door open to find Lucy unconscience on the floor leaned against her bed.
Sumi: Lucy!
He ran over to check on her, and she was fine.
Sumi: Just asleep...
He lifted her onto his back and ran with her down the stairs, toward to house entrance to the smithy. He passed the door, and he noticed it being slammed on, it was near busting. Then the door gave away and a two figures walked into through the haze, claws protruding from their robe sleeves. Sumi saw no option and tossed Lucy to the padded couch across from his, and drew his dagger. He stood between the two and Lucy. The figures wore their sinister smiles and ran up to Sumi and slashed on each of his sides. He ducked the top blow and tossed the bottom blow away with the dagger, then slashed at the ankle of the first foe, missing him by an inch. The two figures backed off, now on each side of Sumi. He backed up closer to Lucy, and the two closed the distance between them, trapping him against the couch. He thrusted with the dagger at the right figure and the left slashed at him, to which he repsonded with a duck. The right figure flew backward to avoid the thrust and was now in the centre of the living room where the battle was taking place. Sumi cut three times in a barrage of slashed at the left figure who went back the same, but not quite fast enough and was hit on the wrist twice. The inujured figure let out a scream that pireced through Sumi's ears and vanished turning to smoke and blowing through the door. One left.
   He stood with his dagger out in front of him, ready to stab into his foe. His opponet didn't move but rather swayed back and forth. The figure stopped moving and rasied his claw to Sumi. The claw shot like a rocket at Sumi, passed his head into the walk behind him. He looked back at the weapon and noticed that on the Couch where Lucy was, she no longer remained. He panicked and turned around, to see the figure fling himself at the boy, knocking him off his feet onto the ground, his back agains the couch. Sumi held him off, but not well and the figure remained on top of him, his smile gone and he was using his teeth as a weapon. Sumi moved his neck to the side and dodged a bite from the figure, who prepared for a second attack, but was hit with a falming oil soaked rag in the side of his head, that burst into flame, catching his head on fire. He stumbled backward into the wall on the far side waving wildly and screeching. The person who had thrown the fire bomb was Lucy, who was now standing in the hall, her hair tied up in a pony tail and out of her face and a kitchen knife in her hand. Sumi stood up and threw his dagger at the figure. It impaled into the figures face and it stopped thrashing around and slumped to the floor in a heap, dead, and unlike the other not vaporising.
Sumi: *Panting* Are you alright?
Lucy: Fine. Where's father?
Sumi: With Al, in the shealter in the smithy.
Lucy: Then let's hurry there.
Sumi: Right!
The two ran to the door and tossed it open. Sumi grabbed a quiver of arrows from the shelf and stepped out into the rest of the shop with Lucy. What they saw was a mess. Equipment and half
finished projects tossed about and broken. A trap door in the back was knocked off it's hinges and fire rose from the inside.
Lucy: Father!
Sumi: Don't run up ahead. Go get some water.
Lucy was silent but understood and ran back to get some water to douse the fire.

Ed: Well well well. Look who survived.
Sumi spun around and saw Edward floating by the ceiling in the far corner of the shop.
Sumi: If they're hurt you'll die! Mark my words!
Ed: Don't worry. I'm just holding the Leo captive the other one escaped. I won't burn him down yet.
Sumi: Smug rat!
Sumi notched an arrow and let it fly at Ed. The arrow was batted aside and broke against the wall.
Ed: You don't belong here! Yet alone should you be insulting someone of my authority! Know your place!
Ed tossed his hand to the side and a javelin flew to his hand. The back end stuck to his open palm, he pointed it at Sumi and it shot.
Sumi was hit in the left shoulder, the javelin stuck halfway threw him, and jammed into the wall, forcing the boy back on the javelin against the wall.
Ed: You poisonous other worlders should never have come here. I'll have to pay a vist to the man who brings you here. Just die. We don't want you here.
The pain made Sumi faint, still pinned to the wall.
Edward floated down to the door and glided out.

Chapter 6 ~FIN~
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« Reply #55 on: August 18, 2010, 11:56:21 AM »

And 7 as well. It however, is short.

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   Sumi woke up. He didn't bother opening his eyes. He felt the pain in his shoulder, but he didn't feel anything there. More than that, he felt like he was on something soft. He moved his toes. All ten were fine, he twiched his legs, check. He moved his right arm, it was fine, his fingers as well. He went to move his left arm, but felt something gripping his hand, it felt damp, and he could feel some breeze blow something hair like across his arm. He turned his head to the side and opened his eyes to see Lucy holding his hand tighly, and sobbing into the hand. Her hair was down and the open window made it blow around gently. He looked at his left shoulder and saw clean bandages. He was in the room he originally stayed in when he first arrived in the New World. Lucy looked up and saw him staring at her. She smiled and wiped her eyes in his hand, then embraced him.
Lucy: I'm so glad.
Sumi: *Still dazed* What... What happened?
Lucy: I came back with the water but the fire was already gone, and I saw you pinned to the wall. So I got some herbal medicines and gave you first aid. I was so worried that I wouldn't have gotten there in time. But, but your fi-
Lucy was cut off by the sound of her own tears. Sumi tried to bring his arms around her to comfort her but could only manage one.
Sumi: Ow-
Lucy: Ohmigosh! I forgot, I'm so sorry *She wiped her eyes again* Do you need a new bandage?
Sumi: No, I'm fine. I just think I'll sit u-
A loud knocking was heard downstairs.
Man: Let us in! Oi! You listening? Were here for that tresspasser!
Lucy: No! No, you need to stand up, you need to run!
Lucy jumped up and tossed the chair back. She leaned to the sied and pulled up Sumi's bow and a quiver of arrows, along with his dagger and the jacket Thomas' parents had tailored for him.
Sumi: Whats happening?
Lucy: After last night the village blamed your presence for everything that's happened. They decided to get rid of you, and that's why they're here. You need to get out here. Get all of that ready, I'll go make sure they don't get in. The ladder is leaned against the window at the end of the roof so you can make it out into the forest behind the house. Go!
Sumi stood up, gripping the reality of the situation, remembering his old world and his instincts to run kicked in. He stood up, grabbed his shirt off the dresser next to him along with his bracer and everything Lucy had prepared next to the bed and he hurried from the room.
Lucy: Can you use the ladder on your own?
Sumi: It's fine, I can do it I'm sure.
Lucy: Then go, about 5minutes along the trail you can make a right into the woods. I've lined the track with purple flowers not native to the region, use those as markers and follow them. There will be a few bags in a tree where the flowers stop. Wait for me there, and we'll leave from there.
Sumi: Mm. Thank you.
Lucy: Don't mention it, now go!

   Sumi walked along the trail in the woods for about five minutes, and then noticed the purple marker flowers indicating his new path, and followed them. The trail was easy to follow, and large debris had been cleared from the path, allowing him to walk with ease with his injured shoulder tossing of his balance.
Sumi (Thought):How did she have time to do everything in one night? Did she work like this to keep her mind off of the events?
The flowers stopped at the base of a great tree, and Sumi looked up. Sure enough, hung from the tree with vine were two packs. Sumi waited there at the base of the massive tree for a while. It was silent for the most part, though every now and then he heard an animal on the trail and would think it was Lucy or the village members coming, and he would go to hide before realizing what it was. And more scary was when he would hear a loud noise or the sound of yelling coming from the village's direction.
   It grew late and the sun was setting. Sumi had been waiting for what seemed like hours, and was about to sneak back to make sure Lucy was fine, when from the flowered path a female figure came by. It was Lucy, Sumi let out a sigh of relief. Though somehting was different about her. She was wearing tight black pants and a green hooded sweat shirt, this was a surprise to Sumi as he had only ever known her to wear dresses. Her hair was tied back into a long pony tail to keep it from her eyes. She walked over and leaped at the large tree and climbed it with ease, letting the packs drop and hang on their rope, then unting the rope and letting the packs fall into a pile of leaves.
Sumi: What happened back there? For a while I thought that they held you up to tell where I was.
Lucy: Well, they sorta did. May made a distraction though. She cried for help and said she was being kidnapped by a robed figure. When they turned back I ran off. I hope she's fine though...
Sumi: Knowing her she should be.
Lucy: Yea they won't stay too mad at her. Anyway, we need to make as much distance as we can tonight. Think you can carry a bag?
Sumi: Yea, of course. Anyway, on the way could you tell me about everything that happened, in detail?
Lucy helped Sumi up and they both took their gear and walked on, Lucy in the lead as she was more familiar with the terrain, and knew where they were going.
Lucy: Last night when everything was over, the villagers all got up and regrouped in the destroied square. Everything was burned down, except for a few houses, but even those had damage done to them. Something else as well happened. Most of the women and children were missing, along with my father, Thomas and Al.
Sumi: Thomas too?
Lucy: Yea, no one has a clue where they are. They think they were kidnapped.
Sumi: They're right, I know that their kidnapped. But Ed said Al escaped.... Could he have been taken afterward?
Lucy: Ed?

   Sumi realized he had mentioned Ed unintentionally, and decided to let the weight off his shoulders. He told Lucy about what had happened, regarded Ed. Instead of reacting the way he thought she would, she seemed much more calm about it.
Lucy: So he was the one responsible for all of this? How would he have come into contact with the Dark Realm anyway?
Sumi: I thought that, that's who was behind that. They didn't seem like fire to me.
Lucy: Well it's obvious, they had such evil power and black magic. Speaking of black, it's too dark to see where we're going. We made good distance anyway, especially for the little time we could use.
Sumi: Where are we headed anyway?
Lucy: Dunno. I figured that we would decide tommorrow. I don't know where we would be safe though.
Sumi laughed a bit, then they both started to laugh, and ended up stopped at the spot and setting up.
Sumi: Ow!
Lucy: What is it?
Sumi: My shoulder. It's getting to hurt a bit.
Lucy: Sit down against that tree. I'll get the medicine.
Lucy swung the bag off her shoulder and pulled out a candle, some matches anda smaller bag, then lit the candle and the smaller bag come unfolded and spread across the ground like a picnic blanket, on top of it was first aid supplies. Sumi took off his shirt and bracer, and layed all his gear to the side, then Lucy unbandaged his wound, tossing the dirty bandages to the side and preparing some ointment from the supplies.
Lucy: This might hurt a bit. *She applied the ointment*
Sumi: Aye aye aye!
Lucy: Warned you.
Lucy finished mending the wound and then packed up the equipment. She hung the packs from a tree in the distance, so wild animals wouldnt be drawn to it, then she returned to the camp. Sumi was fast asleep against a massive tree trunk. Lucy smiled and leaned into his ear and whispered something. Sumi smiled back and relaxed further in his slumber.

Chapter 7 ~FIN~
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« Reply #56 on: August 18, 2010, 12:03:33 PM »

It's long, I'll read it when I have time. Trying to write my story right now.
Anyways, I have to read it over.
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« Reply #57 on: August 18, 2010, 12:04:29 PM »

Excellent, glad to have another reader  Cheesy
I also cleaned up the other chapters. if you see anything point it out to me.
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« Reply #58 on: August 18, 2010, 02:48:49 PM »

Wow... Wow, another chapter! Better get to this! Something to read at last!
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« Reply #59 on: August 19, 2010, 04:39:46 PM »

Well, theres quite a bit then. Here's more to read. Chapter 8&9
No internet makes Sumi a productive boy...

TRANSLATED CHAPTER 8

   Sumi woke up to the forest. He was leaned against the same tree he was by the last night. He checked his shoulder, and the bandages were still clean meaning the wound was healing. Movement was returning to his arm as well, though hardly any. At first he couldn't see Lucy and he started to panic, but when he circled the tree trunk he saw her asleep leaning against the tree. He decided to look around and see what the surroundings were like, as he didn't get to see them well the night before. He saw the tree they were sleeping at, and it was huge. Bigger than the last by far, wider than two men lieing down foot to head, and at least skyscraper tall the size of the canopy created a sort of clearing around the tree, almost as if the forest gave it distance in reverance. He marveled in the sight for a bit, then walked along more. The sun peaked through the trees and fell in beams to the ground. The forest was alive with animals, birds were singing, the bugs were crawling and flying and the small mammals were rushing around. There wasn't a sign of anything bad anywhere, just untouched forest in every direction. Sumi listened harder for a minute or two, and heard something other thant he sund of creatures, he heard what sounded like water, and sure enough a bit right of the site and saw a stream of fresh running water. Sumi returned to the large tree and saw Lucy, who had just woken up, walking around the tree.
Lucy: Someone's up early.
Sumi: Not so much, I only just got up.
Lucy: Ah. Well, then you ready for some food then?
Sumi realized he hadn't eaten in quite a long time and his stomach answered for him.
Lucy: I'll take that as a yes. Any way, I'll go get the packs down, and catch some wild game. You think you can manage getting a fire started?
Sumi: Yea, I can do that.
Lucy walked to the tree where she hid the packs and climbed it as usual and pulled them down and brought them over to the campsite. She opened the pack and took out a rabbit snare, and matches. She tossed the matches to Sumi, who pocketed them for later.
Lucy: I'll be back in an hour or so, don't get lost, and we'll meet up here again.
Sumi: Don't worry, I won't leave the camp site, tinder isn't hard to find anyway.
Lucy smiled and turned around to leave. She was wearing a belt around her waist, with pouches around the sides, and a small sheath on her hip. Sticking out of the sheath was a Leaf-hilted dagger. Sumi reached for his own feather hilted dagger to compare the design, and noticed that his intution was right. She was carrying a weapon her father had crafted.
   Sumi stood up, now alone at the camp site again. He walked toward the tree line of the clearing and examined the tree's for old man's beard and looked for some birches to peel the bark from. He found quite a bit of old man's beard and a single birch which he peeled a large helping of bark from.
Sumi: Could be useful, there doesn't see to be a whole lot of good tinder around. I may as well take what I can.
He collected some dry branches and some larger peices of wood and brought it back to the camp in a few trips. He cleared away the grass and left only the dirt in a small area and surrounded the patch with as big of rocks as he could carry with one arm. He took the bark and beard and tossed it in the fire pit, seperating and organizing the rest of the wood, just biding his time until Lucy returned.

   Sure enough, in roughly an hour Lucy returned to the camp site, carrying a skinned and cleaned rabbit on her shoulder.
Lucy: This area is teeming with wild life. It barely took me any time to find this one.
Sumi: I noticed, it's really beautiful here. It looks like it's been untouched by the humans doesn't it?
Lucy: Mm, it's really natural. The trees are all so large, it's really strange. We can't be too far from the village, I'm surrpised no one has come this way
Lucy walked to the fire pit and Sumi took the matches and prepared the fire, first lighting the tinder then adding branches and progressively bigger logs. Lucy took a folding roaster from a pack and placed it on the fire.
Lucy: Hmm, I kinda want to make stew from this, since there aren't that many nutrients in rabbit, and the vegtables would add in the missing ones. All I have is the drinking water though.
Sumi: Actually there's a stream not far from here, let me go get some water then.
Lucy: Really? You explored around before hand?
Sumi: Yea I like to know my surroundings, it's important to know what you're working with.
Lucy: That's smart of you, you must have honed your skills in your old world.
Sumi: Yep, I had to. Anyway, I guess there's a bucket in one of the packs?
Lucy: Yep, the one to your right.
Sumi: Mhmm. Your prepared yourself.
Lucy: I just figured we'd need all of this.
Sumi stood and walked to the pack to his right and pulled out a metal bucket and carried it to the stream. The rushing water looked like glass, and it was completely transparent. He dipped the bucket in and picked up it up full. Full it was rather heavy, and the thin wire handle dug into his palm and made him wish he had both arms available, but he brought it back to the camp site and sat the bucket down next to Lucy, who was seemingly playing with a few large and small blue pouches she took out of the pack closest to her.
Sumi: I was thinking, what are we going to go for vegtables, are there any near here? I didn't see them myself.
Lucy: I brought some.
Sumi: You brought them? But wouldn't they go bad in the packs for days?
Lucy: Nope! *She held up one of the blue pouches* I took these from the storage at home, it's something dad picked up from a traveling salesmen from the Water Nation. They're normal leather pouches, but they've been treated with water magic, and what ever you put in them stays cold and fresh for months. They're super useful for storage and taking things for trips.
Sumi: Sooo, this *he leaned over to look at the pouch better and poked it* is a magical device?
Lucy: More or less.
Sumi: I was thinking that magical devices would be fancier than a blue sack.
Lucy: Anything can have magic put in it, you just have to find a magician willing to do it. Usually for a price.
Sumi: So, anything can be magic? It seems like magic devices would be pretty common place than, why were there so little in the village? Especially when Mr. Hatchet had some magic of his own.
Lucy: Not so much, magicians are rare to come by. You have to have a pretty pure bloodline to use magic. Most nobels have it, and very few civilians can use it. It would have to run in your bloodline. Bigger cities have magic shops though, normally run my a local magician and his descendants. Rumor has it that my family, my mother's side had some Earth magic quailities as well, but the blood has run so thin that I don't think it's there anymore, not in my generation though. Well, keep this as a secret, but I think Endon had some magic in him. He had a way with plants, and he could bring them almost back to life with barely a touch and some care. My mother was the same way, and it was almost like Endon granted wishes, when ever I watch the star's with him, he'd point up and show me a shooting star that wasn't there before. Like he could make them appear by wishing it.
Sumi: I've only heard of people wishing ON shooting stars, not FOR them.
Lucy: You seem weird about this? Like you've never seen magic before.
Sumi: Besides what I saw on the battlefield, no. My world never had any.
Lucy: What contenient are you from that doesn't have any magic?
Sumi: Let's just say a foreign one, very foreign one. Anyway, about the magic again, you've mentioned Water and Earth magic, and I know Mr. Hatchet said something about Light magic, is it that each Nation has their own magic?
Lucy: For someone who's never seen it you understand well. That's precisly how it works, each Realm or Nation has a specific brand of magic related to their land. If your born there, or have magic blood from a land, then your magic will be based on that land's.
Sumi: So has anyone ever had two or more different kinds?
Lucy: Every now and then two magicians from different lands will have a child who can use multiple magics and they can unlock special kinds then themselves, ususally they become the most powerful magicians of their time and make quite a name from themselves, but it's so rare it only happens every other generation, not every hybrid child will learn both, and even then not every one who learns both will learn special kinds. Further more, two opposite magics cannot and have not ever went together, for example, Fire and Water cannot co-exist in one body, nor can Light or Dark. And no one has ever had more than two. One legend says that Time itself is a magic, known only to Mylarich. Another legend says that one man, after intense training was able to learn every single magic, including opposites, and from there mastered his own special breeds, like raw Energy magic and Time magic, even. But it's just a legend, with no base and no evidence to it ever being true.
Sumi: Oh. It's still so fasinating though.
Lucy: Well, that's everything I know about magic. You've heard the school edition defintion striaght from the pupil there. Foods ready now so eat up.
Lucy handed Sumi a dish of sweet smelling stew which he gladly accepted. Lost in the discussion, he had forgotten that Lucy was actually preparing a meal all the while.

   They each had two bowls of the stew to make sure to finished the pot entirely. There was still lef over meat so Lucy cut off what ever she could from the carcass and stored it in the blue pouches. Sumi rekindled the fire to make it bigger than ever.
Lucy: What's that for? We're leaving soon, it's nearly noon and we need to put it our before we leave.
Sumi: We should burn away our refuse first. Not only to preserve the natural state here, but just incase we were followed this far it'll help cover our tracks better.
Lucy thought for a second with a bit of a embarrassed look.
Lucy: I hadn't thought of that...
Sumi: Don't worry about it, it's just a trick I learned. They say 'Fire can make a conscience clean', I don't know how much truth there is to that, but it sure leaves everything it touches clean.
Sumi collected the scrap rabbit carcass and the bandages from last night and tossed them into the fire, which burned much brighter as a result.
Sumi: Whiel that works it's own 'magic' I'll go clean the dishes in the stream and bring back water to douse the flames later.
Lucy: I'll wait here then and pack up what I can.

   Sumi walked to the river and scrubbed the pots and bowls clean with his hands, letting the residue float on down the stream. It took him about ten minutes to clean them all well enough, and when his work was done he started to stack the dishes to carry back, when he heard a scream from the camp site. He dropped the dishes, which bounced on the ground around the stream without breaking, and he dashed to the tree line of the clearing where the camp site was.
He hid in a bush and looked at the scene. Men he recognized from the village were standing around Lucy, using their size to intimidate her. They were carrying farming tools and makeshift weapons with them, there were three in front interrogating Lucy, and two snooping around in the background searching the camp site and making their way to the tree line.
Lucy: I don't know where he is! He went to do something and hasn't returned!
Man: You know you lier! Where is he?
Lucy: I don't know!
The man leaned into her face and screamed, his face red.
Man: You know damn well bitch! Now tell me where the hell that bastard is! He isn't getting away without paying for what he'd done!
Lucy: *She turned away from his face* Wash out your mouth, your language is as bad as your breath.
The man took the shaft of his makeshift spear and thrust it into Lucy, knocking her into the tree behind her. She pulled out her dagger and tried to crawl behind the tree, but the two snooping men walked on either side of the tree blocking her path and one kicked the dagger from her hand, with force.
Sumi(thought): I've got to do something.
Sumi drew his dagger and held it out with his good hand, getting into a position to spring when from above him a kunai flew to his knee and impaled the ground next to him. Sumi lost his guard from the seeming attack and search the tree line for the assailant. He saw nothing though and looked back to the exotic dagger, and noticed something about it. A piece of paper was tied to the handle, so he picked it off and examined it. It was a note reading "Just wait, don't move" . Sumi felt a bit suspicious of the note and pocketed it without paying it anymind, then was half way through his jump, when an object flew from the trees above him and exploded into a cloud of smoke in the area of the assault. A second kunai landed at his knee and the note attached this time read, "get behind the stream, now!" Sumi listened to this one and hopped past the stream, and hid behind a tree from where he could see the cloud of smoke.

   The cloaked boy held out his wrist, and from his large sleeve shot a smoke bomb that detonated on impact with the clearing. In an instant he launched into the cloud with his goggles up and his gray cloak pulled past his nose, to block the smoke from his lungs, though it was his usual style of wearing his cloak anyway. He stepped into the artificial fog from the tree line where he was lying in wait. He leaped from the edge of the smoke cloud to the large tree in the center in a single agile bound. He stood for a split second before kicking over the blinded men, all in the same motion. He quickly grabbed the packs laid by the tree side, which were fully packed, he kicked some leaves on the now smothered fire to cover it up and grabbed the girl who was coughing with her sleeve over the mouth, leaned against the tree. Even with all the weight he leaped as agile as ever and made it from the cloud in three hops, and dashed from the clearing, and over the stream in hardly any time, his long sleeves trailing behind him in the wind.

   Sumi watched as the cloaked boy jumped the river with Lucy and the bags in his hands, hardly hindered by the extra weight. He landed on the other bank and stood set down Lucy, who stood on her own. Sumi stood out from behind the tree and the gray cloaked man walked toward him with Lucy behind. He passed Sumi with a glance and a "follow me" motion. Sumi, seeing nothing left to do other than comply looked and Lucy and they nodded to each other and walked after the gray cloaked man. They walked at a rather fast pace, for roughly an hour before Gray Cloak stopped and motioned for everyone to sit. Sumi and Lucy sat, followed by Gray Cloak who made a quick check before resting.

Gray Cloak:....
Lucy was the first to speak.
Lucy: Thank you for back there, that was kind of you. I appreciate you doing that, I dont know what would have happened if you had-
Gray Cloak cleared their throat loudly, and stopped Lucy's nervous thank you. Sumi was the next to speak.
Sumi: Who are you anyway? Do you mind telling us your name?
Gray Cloak: For now, yes. You may call me Janin for the time being. (Pronounced Ha-nin)
Sumi: Thank you. Well, Janin, my name is Su-
Janin: I know your names.
Sumi: Oh. Then, may I ask, why did you save Lucy back there, does it have something to do with why you know our names?
Janin: Yes and no. I saved you because you must follow me.
Sumi: Where are you taking us then?
Lucy: Also, why did we travel East from the clearing? We were going to head west, to reach the Light Realm, where we could be in peace.
Sumi: We were?
Lucy: It's the only way I could see it.
Janin: That's no good. You need to come with me. We have to go to the Wind Realm. It will be stopping in the Water Nation next.
Lucy: Why Wind?
Sumi: What's wind?
Lucy: You don't know about Wind?
Sumi: The air, yea.
Janin:.....
Lucy: It's a sort of rogue Realm. It doesn't associate with the others, so I guess it isn't that odd you don't know what it is, really. The interesting thing about it is that it isn't stationary, it moves in the sky.
Sumi: A floating nation?
Lucy: Yup! Every now and then it will stop for a few days over a main city in one of the other Nations or Realms, and you're allowed to pass back and forth while it's docked. Then it'll go off again, and stop sometime later. It's rather unpredictable though. *Turned to Janin* why are we headed east then? How do you know where it will be?
Janin: Natives know when and where it will stop. And it will stop in Water a few days from now. We need to cover the distance between here and there in four days minimum. It docks in two, and stays only for two. It's waiting for us.
Lucy: Wait, we're in the upper center Earth Nation, how are we supposed to make it to the Middle of the Water Nation in two days? Even four is a bit of a stretch, with a wounded member especially. And what's this about it waiting for us, how is that even possible?
Janin: We need to make this brief, your questions are simple. If we dont waste any more time, and the wind blows right for us we can do it in two nights. When we make it there the Wind Realm will leave early with us. It wont be making any more stops.
Sumi: So, we need to cover more ground right away?
Janin: Precisely.
Lucy: I don't think it will be so easy... I lost my dagger in the fray and I can't leave without it, it was my brothers. It was made especially for him, and I cherish it as a heirloom. I need to go back for it

Janin stood and held out his wrist toward Lucy, his hand peeked out and her dagger was pinched between his thumb and forefinger.
Janin: There. Now check his wound to see if it's fine. If so we leave, if not then treat it. Either way we head out before the sun starts to set.

CHAPTER 8 ~FIN~
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