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Author Topic: ISSUE [2]- Candy Sweet Story (The Title So Far)  (Read 2508 times)

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Offline Fallen Kite

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ISSUE [2]- Candy Sweet Story (The Title So Far)
« on: December 26, 2009, 06:11:44 PM »
So here's my manga; Sweet Love
The story's about a girl, who lived on the street as little, but then one day a man takes her home. The man is a candy maker, and teaches her. One day the man dies, and the girl moves away to start her own shop (Hmm... I need a name for her... Maybe Kanna... For the time being it is). Then when she's just moved in, another candy maker moves in next to her... Cool son = love / Angry father, who destroys Kanna's shop, but becomes good in the end = action.

Hmm... As far as I understand, Sweets is British and Candy is American, right? Hmpf, I would like to use both as I please, but that's not possible is it? :'( ::)




















« Last Edit: February 17, 2010, 05:34:51 PM by Burning Kite »
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Re: ISSUE [2]- Sweet Love (The Title So Far)
« Reply #1 on: December 26, 2009, 06:20:34 PM »
Sounds like a great story. =)

Make sure your sizing is correct so you won't have to redraw it later. >.<
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Re: ISSUE [2]- Sweet Love (The Title So Far)
« Reply #2 on: December 26, 2009, 06:48:06 PM »
Your character is so cute~ :D.

I think I'll enjoy this story ;)
What a grammar...= =)''

Should I return to learn it again?

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Re: ISSUE [2]- Sweet Love (The Title So Far)
« Reply #3 on: December 27, 2009, 04:13:54 AM »
That's a big surprise Kite! Your style has improved a lot! The story is more mature and cute than your previous work.

I like this page a lot!

Maybe you could add shiny stars or funny effects around the father when he appears, to make the character funnier.

Congrats!

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Re: ISSUE [2]- Sweet Love (The Title So Far)
« Reply #4 on: December 27, 2009, 04:31:40 AM »
wow. This one looks great. huge improvement. Keep it up. Kite are you gonna make 15 page story ?

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Re: ISSUE [2]- Sweet Love (The Title So Far)
« Reply #5 on: December 27, 2009, 11:56:58 AM »
Sai :@: Yessir, thanks ;) *Going to check* It's the correct size ;)

Prim :@: Aaah, thanks :) She's gonna change though, but if you like girls with black hair covering their eyes, you should check out Mysterious Girlfriend X  ;)

Cory :@: Fufufu, I am a genius after all  :JC_cheesy: Just kidding ;) And thanks :) It's a good idea to add some effects :3

Hasith :@: Arigatou, and yes, I'ts gonna be a 15 page story (Phew, I'm gonna die)
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Re: ISSUE [2]- Sweet Love (The Title So Far)
« Reply #6 on: December 29, 2009, 05:48:52 PM »
nice work Kite.. *thumbs up* .. post up more pages when you get finished with them 8)
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Re: ISSUE [2]- Sweet Love (The Title So Far)
« Reply #7 on: December 30, 2009, 12:51:15 AM »
agreed! the story is very intriguing ^^

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Re: ISSUE [2]- Sweet Love (The Title So Far)
« Reply #8 on: December 30, 2009, 10:58:04 AM »
Doodles :@: Thank you Doodles :)

Though I have some kind of      brrr     drawing blockade-thingy-thing  :'( And I'm also moving from momma's home to pappa's home and back and forth, so I haven't been able to work on it  :(
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Re: ISSUE [2]- Candy Sweet Story (The Title So Far)
« Reply #9 on: February 15, 2010, 08:13:51 PM »
kite, you mind if i turn your comic into a flash video short? at least the very first part... I could even post in on DA to bring attention the mangaraiders if id be allowed to do something like that  :D
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Re: ISSUE [2]- Candy Sweet Story (The Title So Far)
« Reply #10 on: February 15, 2010, 08:19:36 PM »
I saw the pages! its a great story kite! nice job!!

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Re: ISSUE [2]- Candy Sweet Story (The Title So Far)
« Reply #11 on: February 16, 2010, 01:54:08 AM »
It's a cute story! I like it a lot!

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Re: ISSUE [2]- Candy Sweet Story (The Title So Far)
« Reply #12 on: February 16, 2010, 02:04:52 AM »
You've made great improvements, Kite! I can't wait to see how much you improve again. =)
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Re: ISSUE [2]- Candy Sweet Story (The Title So Far)
« Reply #13 on: February 16, 2010, 03:20:52 AM »
Tzefa :@: I don't mind at all  :JC_cheesy: Thank you for the compliment :)

Doodles :@: Thank you!! I'm glad you think it's great :'( <-ToJ

Cory :@: I'm very happy you liked it :3

Sai :@: Nya :blush: Thank you, Sai :3 I'll continue to improve

t's always so nice to hear such comments  :'(
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