Well, I must say, this is osme top notch work.
Though God powers, which you main character seems to possess, turn me away from stories, your wrting was spectacular.
It flowed seemlessly, the description was just right, and over all I was majorly impressed by the writing.
Its long too, and must have taken forever because of how much work was clearly put into this.
Though not my cup of tea, I did enjoy it, and anyone who is interested in this genre, would for sure become a huge fan of Coryn Sken
I didn't quite make it all the way through either, so if I'm missing anything thats my own fault >,<