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Author Topic: Coryn's Saga Arc 1  (Read 20703 times)

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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 1
« Reply #180 on: April 15, 2014, 12:57:03 PM »
Take your time with it.  I wanna read your best work, so if I have to wait a little while to see that then I'm cool with it.
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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 1
« Reply #181 on: April 15, 2014, 12:59:29 PM »
well for that I'd have to finish the rewrite. who knows when that will happen. besides arc 3 is already happening at my height of skill, so getting you there sooner rather than later will be best.

besides, once i finish patching what i can deliver to you is still at least 3 times better than what's on MR.

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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 1
« Reply #182 on: April 15, 2014, 01:18:28 PM »
Well alright then. Looking forward to it.
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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 1
« Reply #183 on: April 15, 2014, 05:46:49 PM »
Ah, an unbiased reader. I'll be looking forward to see what you think about it fro

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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 1
« Reply #184 on: December 16, 2017, 08:08:32 PM »
I freaking forgot that I even requested to read the updated version of this...

Coryn. I'm ready to read the rewrite. I'm not sure if you ever got around to finishing it, but if you did, I would very much love to see it. I might mess around and read the original while I wait.
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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 1
« Reply #185 on: December 17, 2017, 09:04:26 AM »
Uhah, oi right. Yeah that rewrite never got finished. Decided to concentrate on new work ultimately.

I can still link you the most up to date version though.

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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 1
« Reply #186 on: December 18, 2017, 07:47:51 AM »
That's fine. Whatever you consider its best version that's the one I want to read.

I would also like to mention that I already took it upon myself to begin reading the story. I'm enjoying it so far. Coryn's character is witty and mysterious and those are good qualities for an MC to have. When you send me the rewrite though, should I pick up where I left on the original version and go from there, or should I start over anew?

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Im on the part where Coryn and the crew enter one of those dark cloud covered cities for the first time. I'm wondering if there were any changes made to the story in the update, which is why I asked the above question
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Re: Coryn's Saga Arc 1
« Reply #187 on: December 18, 2017, 01:51:59 PM »
Well, of the rewriting I did (which is now itself out of date, of course), it was mostly at the start. So, yeah probably. At least I think it shall be. I'll send it over tonight though. So don't power on too much.

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