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Offline Corycaly

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Issue 01 : Run and Hide
« on: August 28, 2009, 05:49:45 AM »
Here is mine
The size is ok, I resized it for viewing purposes. It's the non lettered version!
Issue one: Run and hide












« Last Edit: August 28, 2009, 06:52:55 AM by Hasith »
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Re: Issue 01 : Run and Hide
« Reply #1 on: August 28, 2009, 06:53:58 AM »
Haven't done text yet ?
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Re: Issue 01 : Run and Hide
« Reply #2 on: August 28, 2009, 10:58:10 AM »
looking good co. very stylized looking
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Re: Issue 01 : Run and Hide
« Reply #3 on: August 29, 2009, 06:57:29 PM »
Quote from: Coryn Sken on August 28, 2009, 10:58:10 AM
looking good co. very stylized looking

i agree... the style is very different to what i've seen....  but still its really good....   it looks like the artworks u see in an art gallery......  but it represents the story so well
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Re: Issue 01 : Run and Hide
« Reply #4 on: August 30, 2009, 04:40:20 AM »
Very emotional :) Especially the two last pages  :icon_santa:
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Re: Issue 01 : Run and Hide
« Reply #5 on: August 30, 2009, 04:08:13 PM »
Here is the lettered version!










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Re: Issue 01 : Run and Hide
« Reply #6 on: August 30, 2009, 04:33:54 PM »
Beautifully done, Cory! We're well on our way to the publication stage. =)
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Re: Issue 01 : Run and Hide
« Reply #7 on: August 30, 2009, 04:42:09 PM »
Ilove it!! Its sad, but I felt my heart wrentch T.T...beautiful
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Re: Issue 01 : Run and Hide
« Reply #8 on: August 30, 2009, 05:20:32 PM »
It's the first time I made such a short story. The idea came up immediately, reading the theme we had choosen (war). I wanted at first to end the story at the page four, when they are discovered. I wanted a full suspense, the reader wouldn't have know if the children died or survived. But I hate killing my characters so I gave them a new hope.
I didn't name them: both because I didn't have any inspiration to find names, and because I don't think they are necessary to understand the story. Those characters represent a general story, not a special case in particular.
I hope this story will please you!
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Re: Issue 01 : Run and Hide
« Reply #9 on: August 30, 2009, 06:05:57 PM »
It sure has pleased me! You and Doodler have raised the bar so high, though. xD Can I get away with chibi now? =P
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Re: Issue 01 : Run and Hide
« Reply #10 on: August 30, 2009, 06:32:35 PM »
yes. yes you can.
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Re: Issue 01 : Run and Hide
« Reply #11 on: August 30, 2009, 06:55:22 PM »
WOW... lol...  that was a really good manga
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Re: Issue 01 : Run and Hide
« Reply #12 on: August 30, 2009, 09:10:16 PM »
thats really cool.
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Re: Issue 01 : Run and Hide
« Reply #13 on: August 30, 2009, 09:25:37 PM »
wow, that was really dramatic and emotional.. there's just some minor grammar issues here and there but, other than that .. great job Cory!!  8)

@ Doodles: forgive me.. but, you spelled "wrench" wrong again, :tongue: lol
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Re: Issue 01 : Run and Hide
« Reply #14 on: September 13, 2009, 12:43:52 PM »
DID YOU DO THESE WITH YOUR PEN TABLET? -faints- DX...amazing... :JC_cheesy:
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