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Author Topic: Entropic Sun  (Read 467 times)

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Offline Tenori Tejima

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Entropic Sun
« on: April 11, 2023, 09:04:20 AM »
Decided to be productive for once and make the tiniest bit of progress. (My inexperience will show)

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Offline Suuper-san

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Re: Entropic Sun
« Reply #1 on: April 11, 2023, 03:45:20 PM »
ooohhhhhh a great start, can't wait to read more!!!
so far great camera angles and flow between panels, keep it up!
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Re: Entropic Sun
« Reply #2 on: April 17, 2023, 12:44:49 PM »
Agreed! Simple but evocative opening. Looking forward to this continuing.
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