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Author Topic: Araminta  (Read 20115 times)

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Offline Suuper-san

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Re: Araminta
« Reply #45 on: April 11, 2021, 01:37:40 PM »
lovely bunch of pages!

looking forward to more :D
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« Reply #47 on: November 12, 2021, 09:30:56 AM »













It damn near killed me ;-; At one piont I hadent worked on it for two years, maybe more I cant quiete remember. But I did it

And looking back at older pages interesting to see how much i've improved :)

I've gotten more consitant too thats the truth, so I hope to be more regular from now on.

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« Reply #48 on: December 16, 2021, 12:51:26 PM »
I think your style has definitely developed over time, I had a glance back over the older pages and you are using the page much more effectively now than you used to. But I think you're using fuller backgrounds less, I prefer the sharper more complete backgrounds in the earlier pages personally.

I really liked how the story developed and the way it was told, it was easy to see what was going on in the pages, and you kept the tension up with the twists and turns while they were escaping and hiding. Really good job!
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