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Author Topic: Haku's Manga Gallery! Comments and Critiques Encouraged!  (Read 241 times)

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Offline KohakuRiver

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Haku's Manga Gallery! Comments and Critiques Encouraged!
« on: October 17, 2020, 11:21:44 PM »
Hi, I was on the forum 2 years ago but didn't stay long.
Life got a bit tumultuous for a while but now I'm back.
I am drawing manga and I will post WIP pages and illustrations. I would really like feedback, and if you're bored you can redline my sketches. It would really help.

Here is the current picture I'm working on.
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Personally I think I need to fix the chair, it looks wierd as hell.

The manga pages I got some reviews on and it was helpful. They're really bad though. Thank god its just a WIP, lol
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I never do the pages in order... but whatever.. no rush in life as long as I get it done.

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Re: Haku's Manga Gallery! Comments and Critiques Encouraged!
« Reply #1 on: October 18, 2020, 05:57:49 PM »
Welcome back Kohaku! I'm glad things have calmed down for you a bit. Good luck with your drawing endeavours!

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Re: Haku's Manga Gallery! Comments and Critiques Encouraged!
« Reply #2 on: October 18, 2020, 11:54:11 PM »
Thanks for the encouragment.
didn't feel like drawing today but I did one practice sketch just because.
Its not very good because I did it just now and Im super tired. I will do better tomorrow.
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Re: Haku's Manga Gallery! Comments and Critiques Encouraged!
« Reply #3 on: October 19, 2020, 05:57:38 AM »
Practice makes perfect as they say. Looks like you referenced the armour and stuff for this dude. Roman by any chance?

I like them. And also welcome back to MR. Hope things have calmed down a bit

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Re: Haku's Manga Gallery! Comments and Critiques Encouraged!
« Reply #4 on: October 20, 2020, 05:39:14 PM »
Awesome that you're working on a manga project!
And welcome back!
I always procrastinate doing big projects like that haha
Definitely getting a Roman vibe from that last one!
Looking forward to seeing more as you work on your manga!
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Re: Haku's Manga Gallery! Comments and Critiques Encouraged!
« Reply #5 on: October 22, 2020, 11:51:48 AM »
Thanks for the words of encouragement guys.
I am not very good with ideas so whenever I don't know what to draw I just go on gaia and do free requests for art. So I'm working on a picture of someone's OC here. I want to work my way up to sell freelance here and there, I figure drawing all these different characters can be good practice and push me out of my comfort zone.


Here is the sketch of the first one I drew. It was hard cuz she didn't give a full reference. I want to edit it a lot more.. the sketch of the body feels wrong even though I used a reference for the pose. I wanted to make the character skinny to fit the aesthetic but.. it just came out kind of weird? IDK.
https://imagizer.imageshack.com/img924/1956/gpXzRT.png the reference
https://imagizer.imageshack.com/img924/5041/vKO1m4.png the sketch

A bit of work on the lineart from the other day. I will just paint in the hieroglyphics of the chair. I should have used proper perspective when drawing that chair because its a pain in my behind to line and color it now x.x a warning a bit nsfw? like not porno but she's naked...
https://imagizer.imageshack.com/img924/8176/l0z2v6.png

As for my comics I really think I need to redo the name before working on any more of them. I'm also thinking of reordering the few pages I have done. Pacing feels off.