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Nature of the Beast© Mature/18+
« on: January 31, 2020, 01:36:21 PM »
https://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/nature-of-the-beast/list?title_no=437244

This link will lead you to the story on webtoons.

Again, thanks to all who viewed the illustrations while they were available on MangaRaiders.

I hope this new format accommodates mobile viewers and pc viewers alike.
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Re: Nature of the Beast©
« Reply #1 on: April 09, 2020, 01:20:32 AM »
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Re: Nature of the Beast©
« Reply #2 on: April 09, 2020, 07:34:02 AM »
All caps counts as shouting in internet lingo so you should probably write the dialogue without capitalizing it. As for the chapter there are interesting character designs and the action looks like it'd be cool to see.

 However for a first chapter introducing the world I'm not sure what the plot is about.

What was Dash looking for from the Matador? Did he just go there to provoke him? Why are the humans arresting someone without knowing their abilities?

Anyhow having a script like this is very useful for when you want to get your comic drawn. So long as the formatting is good and readeable it's an advantage over simple prose, so that's a good start if you want to get into webtoons and comics.

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Re: Nature of the Beast©
« Reply #3 on: April 09, 2020, 09:16:28 AM »
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Re: Nature of the Beast© Mature/18+
« Reply #4 on: April 15, 2020, 04:49:07 AM »
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Re: Nature of the Beast© Mature/18+
« Reply #5 on: April 16, 2020, 11:39:56 AM »
You should concentrate on what you're comfortable with first. Chasing the popular opinion will burn you out faster than anything. Find your own pace, and work within those constraints. Especially as most people aren't going to be keeping a daily schedule for this kind of thing, it's more important to be producing a consistent pace that can be monitored internally.

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Re: Nature of the Beast© Mature/18+
« Reply #6 on: April 16, 2020, 05:50:12 PM »
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Re: Nature of the Beast© Mature/18+
« Reply #7 on: April 18, 2020, 03:01:16 PM »
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Re: Nature of the Beast© Mature/18+
« Reply #8 on: April 25, 2020, 02:54:23 PM »
A big thanks to those who have read the story and looked at all of the images.
If you did not get a chance to see it, I am very sorry.
I will post here with details on where, and when, the story will be available again.
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Re: Nature of the Beast© Mature/18+
« Reply #9 on: May 12, 2020, 10:49:39 AM »
re uploaded story to webtoons