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Author Topic: Tantei 10  (Read 1708 times)

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Offline BlackManga

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Re: Tantei 10
« Reply #15 on: August 11, 2019, 11:00:56 AM »
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Here is chapter 3














« Last Edit: August 19, 2019, 02:21:22 PM by BlackManga »

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Re: Tantei 10
« Reply #16 on: August 19, 2019, 07:46:59 AM »
Really cool manga you've got going on Black! I need to come back when I have more time to make story comments, but from an artistic perspective, you're really managing to do a lot with a little in terms of complexity! There isn't a huge level of detail, but it's clear what's going on!

(On a side note, may I suggest using our spoiler tag system? You can generate some by using the "Sp" button when posting. They will help condense each page of the topic and keep scrolling easy for people (especially for those of us on a phone, haha))

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Re: Tantei 10
« Reply #17 on: August 19, 2019, 02:22:32 PM »
Really cool manga you've got going on Black! I need to come back when I have more time to make story comments, but from an artistic perspective, you're really managing to do a lot with a little in terms of complexity! There isn't a huge level of detail, but it's clear what's going on!

(On a side note, may I suggest using our spoiler tag system? You can generate some by using the "Sp" button when posting. They will help condense each page of the topic and keep scrolling easy for people (especially for those of us on a phone, haha))

Thanks! It means a lot! And thanks for explaining the spoiler tag system. Using it makse it easier to navigate.

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Re: Tantei 10
« Reply #18 on: February 01, 2020, 01:17:09 PM »
Damn I could almost swear I'd already commented on this. Super late to the party but I really liked the chapters. I love action like this in shounen. It's always been shounen at its' best when there's some good balance between battle physics and super powers. Naruto at its best moment is a shining example of that and basically Hunter X Hunter every time.

Good stuff. Hope you're still working on this (if you're around)