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Offline BlackManga

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Tantei 10
« on: August 08, 2019, 06:45:24 PM »
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This is my first manga. All constructive criticism is accepted.



































« Last Edit: August 19, 2019, 02:20:26 PM by BlackManga »

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Re: Tantei 10
« Reply #1 on: August 08, 2019, 07:05:48 PM »
If you posted images, they're not showing up.

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Re: Tantei 10
« Reply #2 on: August 08, 2019, 07:17:07 PM »
If you posted images, they're not showing up.
It seems to be working on my PC but not on mobile. Since I'm new to this site, I don't understand what's happening.
« Last Edit: August 08, 2019, 07:19:43 PM by BlackManga »

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Re: Tantei 10
« Reply #3 on: August 08, 2019, 08:15:59 PM »
All of your links go to 403 Forbidden

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Re: Tantei 10
« Reply #4 on: August 08, 2019, 09:43:19 PM »
Pixiv had a security system that prevents sharing via image link, even if the person distributing it is the artist themselves unless provided (you can link it to your Facebook and Twitter).

You've no choice but to upload it somewhere else and them post the image links to display the images in question.

https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=42682774 <- Your profile, I think?
PM me if you wanted a critique. It takes time for one to come to you, so please be patient.

If you wanted it to be public or private, do tell me.

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Re: Tantei 10
« Reply #5 on: August 09, 2019, 09:20:55 AM »
If you posted images, they're not showing up.
It seems to be working on my PC but not on mobile. Since I'm new to this site, I don't understand what's happening.

I'm very sorry for the difficulties, but I've been told what the problem is and fixed it. They should now be visible.

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Re: Tantei 10
« Reply #6 on: August 09, 2019, 09:21:18 AM »
All of your links go to 403 Forbidden

I'm very sorry for the difficulties, but I've been told what the problem is and fixed it. They should now be visible.

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Re: Tantei 10
« Reply #7 on: August 09, 2019, 09:21:57 AM »
Pixiv had a security system that prevents sharing via image link, even if the person distributing it is the artist themselves unless provided (you can link it to your Facebook and Twitter).

You've no choice but to upload it somewhere else and them post the image links to display the images in question.

https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=42682774 <- Your profile, I think?

Thank you so much! I have now solved the issue thanks to you.

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Re: Tantei 10
« Reply #8 on: August 09, 2019, 12:50:09 PM »
welcome to the forum!
And great comic!
the action was awesome and the character designs are cool. would be great to see another chapter!
how long did it take to draw?
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Re: Tantei 10
« Reply #9 on: August 09, 2019, 01:10:15 PM »
welcome to the forum!
And great comic!
the action was awesome and the character designs are cool. would be great to see another chapter!
how long did it take to draw?
Thanks! I might add other chapters later, and this specific one took me a few months. Maybe 3-4.

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Re: Tantei 10
« Reply #10 on: August 09, 2019, 01:27:02 PM »
hopefully you'll churn the next one out faster XD
I'm generally 2 years in between producing chapters, of different stories, so I can't really talk haha
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Re: Tantei 10
« Reply #11 on: August 09, 2019, 01:33:13 PM »
hopefully you'll churn the next one out faster XD
I'm generally 2 years in between producing chapters, of different stories, so I can't really talk haha
I actually have many completed in store. The 1st chapter is always much longer than the rest. The other chapters are shorter and take about a week to make if I don't procrastinate.

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Re: Tantei 10
« Reply #12 on: August 09, 2019, 04:10:22 PM »
a week, huh?
thats pretty hardcore, and yes procrastination is the enemy. If I actually drew using all the free time I had, now wouldnt that be something.....
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Re: Tantei 10
« Reply #13 on: August 09, 2019, 04:51:06 PM »
a week, huh?
thats pretty hardcore, and yes procrastination is the enemy. If I actually drew using all the free time I had, now wouldnt that be something.....
To be fair, with the exception of the 1st, the chapters only range from 12 to 16 pages, and I was on summer break, so I had all week. But then again, I do tend to procrastinate...

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Re: Tantei 10
« Reply #14 on: August 11, 2019, 10:53:54 AM »
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This the second chapter

















« Last Edit: August 19, 2019, 02:20:51 PM by BlackManga »