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Author Topic: "La Sanctum" Club Discussion Thread  (Read 666 times)

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Offline DeAngelus

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"La Sanctum" Club Discussion Thread
« on: January 21, 2019, 07:34:39 AM »
All discussions, talks and feedbacks goes here. Let's keep the story thread as it is and not stack them with regular posts.

My long contemplation on where to put this thread and what to post in conjunction to the creation to this thread is what it took so long to start this thread. So, here it is ...

I had plans on starting a secondary story but I'm on the fence as to which to start. I'll post brief summaries here later on.
« Last Edit: January 21, 2019, 09:06:13 AM by DeAngelus »
PM me if you wanted a critique. It takes time for one to come to you, so please be patient.

If you wanted it to be public or private, do tell me.

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Re: "La Sanctum" Club Discussion Thread
« Reply #1 on: January 30, 2019, 11:56:23 AM »
Eh, screw it. I'll just work on one that had more substance than the rest and continue on from there.

New story coming (not so) soon.
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Re: "La Sanctum" Club Discussion Thread
« Reply #2 on: January 11, 2020, 06:03:43 AM »
For those who do read 'La Sanctum' (Not yet finalized but this is the title I'm going to use to replace the current one for the story) and wondered what happen to the updates... here's the update for you.

Currently, it's up to chapter 30-ish, with chapter 25 and beyond still under heavy scrutiny. I could begin posting the other chapters that passed the check but I had second guesses if I should post it in its current state (it is technically complete). While in the middle of writing chapter 30, I had decided to do a full revision of the story, like all of it, from chapter 1. That way, I don't have keep worrying that I might missed, added or badly wrote certain details, dialogue, injections, etc and give each chapter its proper finalization (meaning, I will never modify the chapter any further, hopefully) . And true enough, I stumbled upon redundancies early on and thus, no new chapters from me.

As of this post, I'm only on chapter 6 on revision phase. Once it's all done, I'll update the whole chapter with the revised version and then the new chapter will be up right afterwards.

And this process affect the development of the new story (zero progress), in addition to having to juggle other "life" stuffs.
PM me if you wanted a critique. It takes time for one to come to you, so please be patient.

If you wanted it to be public or private, do tell me.