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Author Topic: Nemesis Vol. 1 (Editing :c)  (Read 151 times)

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Nemesis Vol. 1 (Editing :c)
« on: January 06, 2020, 03:36:55 PM »
So I kind of finished the rough version of my novel, which was originally a manga concept but I put it into novel format. I'm sure you can tell it as a manga concept just by reading it or it being on this site to begin with lol. just wanted to get some objective opinions on it and editing recommendations as well. I'l post the link to the draft at the bottom, just lmk what you guys think. Also, was thinking about dividing the novel based on acts/arcs within the first volume. well, enough blabbering and I'll leave the reading up to you guys   ;D




https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qznJsX5VuYVwlFL-6ev9plkuhdGimZV4AnnTpj17MZY/edit?usp=sharing
« Last Edit: January 08, 2020, 12:02:18 AM by Vikings1428 »

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Re: Editing :c
« Reply #1 on: January 06, 2020, 09:45:00 PM »
Congrats on getting this done Vikings! What you've done is no mean feat! Unfortunately I don't have time to dig in tonight, but I hope to tackle it when I find some time (at least part of it, lol). How long is it in the end?

Will review stories upon request. My latest arc: http://goo.gl/KYgsfF

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Re: Editing :c
« Reply #2 on: January 06, 2020, 10:09:48 PM »
Hey man I hope you can sell it and have physical copies. That would be awesome I would like to have a copy and btw I quit social media because of mental health I hope we just keep in touch on discord. Still working on my stuff hopefully i'll get somewhere

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Re: Editing :c
« Reply #3 on: January 08, 2020, 12:01:26 AM »
thanks guys! and sure @evand498, if you need some advice or anything just @ me on the discord chat, I don't usually check it that often

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Re: Nemesis Vol. 1 (Editing :c)
« Reply #4 on: January 08, 2020, 09:12:20 PM »
Ok sure sounds good I'll try to figure out what I can do with my stuff