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Author Topic: Superhuman Ability-Type Manga Idea  (Read 125 times)

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Offline SavageLords91

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Superhuman Ability-Type Manga Idea
« on: January 05, 2019, 12:48:04 AM »
I was going to place this next idea in my other topic but couldn't find a way to edit the title so that it just said Manga Ideas or whatever.  So, here is my next idea for a Manga.  Typically, Manga's of this nature have, most likely, been done before but I hope my plot separates itself from others even if only a little bit.  Tell me what you think.

Seven college individuals, all with entirely different personalities and nothing in common, become friends after receiving a suspicious note offering them a chance at a new life full of power and riches.  Each deals with the offer in their own way and they all eventually accept the proposal until one of them vanishes.  One after the next, they start to disappear from existence.  When they awaken, they are inside some sort of stasis chamber filled with water (not sure what they are called ;P).  The room is empty and dark as they all come to.  One of them manages to break free of the chamber and releases the others.

As they attempt to escape this prison-like area in which they were brought, they come in contact with resistance.  As adrenaline runs through each one them they begin to experience shocking abilities which they unknowingly use against the soldiers.  Before they can escape they come across the man in charge who calmly tries to reason with them but they will not accept what has happened.  The man then orders their execution which the friends are able to defend against and manage to finally escape...all except for one who stays behind to give them time to run away.

As days pass the friends become closer and try to understand and learn to control their newfound abilities.  However, they begin to feel a dark presence surrounding them; watching them.  What they do not realize is that their lost friend is still very much alive and very angry.  They later discover that he was not killed but rather placed back into his chamber so that these scientists could continue their project of making controllable superhumans.  The lost friend is no longer responsive and his abilities have been heightened.

He uses his powers to change reality and shake things up for his former friends.  They attempt to stop him but are not strong enough to do so.  The world becomes worse as the government is brought under total control of the man who gave them their powers.  They come to a breaking point from which they believe there is no surviving the impending doom.  However, one of the friends notices something odd about the world they are in.  Something very similar to what happened when their former friend used his abilities for the first time.

They all soon realize that it is all an illusion and they are trapped inside his mind.  They use this as an advantage that, ultimately, allows them to supercharge their abilities.  They finally manage to escape the trance they are in but when they awake they are back in the chambers with the lead scientist and their former friend, who appears more robot than human, standing on the other side of the glass.

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Re: Superhuman Ability-Type Manga Idea
« Reply #1 on: January 05, 2019, 01:53:07 AM »
At first, it sounds like a normal superheroes story.
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When we get to the trapped inside his mind part. The evil within. It's a horror game where at the end you find you are inside someone mind. Again It's not a criticism. Like you said your plot may separate it and make it stand out
It's a cool idea, it can be a fun superheroes story. I think you enjoy a build up then a twist in your writing.

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Re: Superhuman Ability-Type Manga Idea
« Reply #2 on: January 05, 2019, 03:26:28 AM »
I definitely do. I hate watching TV series or movies or whatever in which I can guess what is going to happen. I want to be able to create something that keeps everyone guessing what is going to happen next instead of knowing what is going to happen.

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Re: Superhuman Ability-Type Manga Idea
« Reply #3 on: January 05, 2019, 03:54:03 PM »
Oh boy, tough crowd. I guess neither of these ideas are quite what anyone is looking for LOL I guess I'll keep at it.

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Re: Superhuman Ability-Type Manga Idea
« Reply #4 on: January 05, 2019, 06:29:16 PM »
This can be deleted.

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Re: Superhuman Ability-Type Manga Idea
« Reply #5 on: January 11, 2019, 04:20:59 PM »
It's not that its a tough crowd. The ideas sound nice but. From what I see people have their own ideas that they are passionate about and want to get made.
Don't take that no one jumping on your ideas personal. If you enjoy making ideas Go ahead and make them. Maybe someone will find a spark of inspiration in one of your ideas.