Hey, guys, I'm back with a few more drawings:
Launch using the Dodon ray from the Dragon Ball series. I like the way this came out but I am still looking for critiques to improve. That will probably always be true for anything I make.
Here are the first two work in progress pages for my first Manga. I'm really nervous about it but I still want all the critique I can get. As an exercise for myself, I will be drawing all of the anatomies (on a separate layer) regardless of whether it is visible in the final product. For example, the man in bed is covered by sheets up to his neck for the final release but I've drawn his full body and anatomy anyway because I need to get better at it. This will make things take a lot longer to make, but I think it's worth it.
I struggle really hard with faces and any help I can get with that would be great.
The floating hands and other random bits are just failed attempts that I keep for posterity when reviewing my progress. They will not appear in the final product.
Lastly, I was advised to redo this entire panel by another friend and I agree with that. The perspective is awkward and the head and hands look weird. I don't quite know how I would make it better if I were to do the exact same angle. When I redo it, I will make a more manageable perspective, but please give me all the advice you can on how to fix these mistakes moving forward. My lack of experience with heads really shows here.
Please let me know about any issues you see because I really do not want to have to make changes after it's inked. I appreciate all comments