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Author Topic: Help with a plothole  (Read 1220 times)

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Offline Rustee

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Re: Help with a plothole
« Reply #15 on: April 22, 2019, 11:22:06 AM »
Optical illusion?  Maze? 
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Re: Help with a plothole
« Reply #16 on: April 22, 2019, 11:23:51 AM »
Or what about a curse?
It does not matter how slowly you go as long as you do not stop. – Confucius

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Re: Help with a plothole
« Reply #17 on: April 22, 2019, 04:55:29 PM »
That sounds cool. But i would keep in mind it has to be foreign because of its narure and no human has never seen it. Which now that i type it the optical illusion thing could work best, for instance the surrounding cities or towns could be looking at it and not know what it is and inadvertently modled their world after it not knowing it

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Re: Help with a plothole
« Reply #18 on: April 22, 2019, 07:35:36 PM »
Hey guys, the topic creator hasn't been around since August.

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Re: Help with a plothole
« Reply #19 on: April 22, 2019, 11:37:36 PM »
@Ryuu In 2030 when he comes back, he will get all the answers.

Memory wipe

memory wipe sounds great. But if you mark the location on a map or write it in a diary you will still have that after the memory wipe. I had the idea to memory wipe the "bad people" in my story but not sure how that will go.
Old fashioned hiding. People already suggested some of those.





This look fun to draw. I'll make a city like this.

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Re: Help with a plothole
« Reply #20 on: April 23, 2019, 03:17:42 AM »
"memory wipe sounds great. But if you mark the location on a map or write it in a diary you will still have that after the memory wipe. I had the idea to memory wipe the "bad people" in my story but not sure how that will go."

That's the thing. You could easily use that as a plot device - a villain who is in the habit of keeping diary finds the place, but gets memory wiped... but because he has his diary, he can gather all necessary information and later abuse the tower's power, having found a way to circumvent the memory wipe system.

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Re: Help with a plothole
« Reply #21 on: April 23, 2019, 07:51:11 AM »
@Keanfox that last one is pretty cool idea. In fact the same idea could be used with water up to the top, so even if you dive, you think it's just an empty lake until you find the tunnel. plenty of stories have done that before.
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