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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #15 on: June 21, 2018, 09:13:40 PM »

mask v1.0
idk if its worth posting it here,
but i did it anyway

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #16 on: June 21, 2018, 09:32:00 PM »
It's worth posting if you've drawn it! It's always good to build a sense of continuing work.

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #17 on: June 22, 2018, 12:09:45 PM »

this time i thought i'd try with dog ears

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #18 on: June 22, 2018, 07:58:34 PM »


this Anna,she is a character from a manga i'm working on
« Last Edit: June 22, 2018, 08:06:34 PM by mhmd007 »

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #19 on: June 26, 2018, 08:04:11 PM »


this is a new character,that i'm working on.
what do you think guys

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #20 on: June 26, 2018, 08:44:18 PM »
Well I'm always a sucker for sharp toothed characters. Is there something behind that? Or is it just a design choice?

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #21 on: June 26, 2018, 11:02:30 PM »
Well I'm always a sucker for sharp toothed characters. Is there something behind that? Or is it just a design choice?

i thought she would look cuter if she had a sharp tooth or two of them
but she ended looking like a vampire,
the look i was aiming for(Komachi Hikigaya)from  My Teen Romantic Comedy SNAFU
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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #22 on: June 27, 2018, 07:33:21 AM »
You definitely are straddling that line. I would lesson the length nof the teeth, and widen the base. The point can still be sharp, but that way they'll look a lot less like fangs (you'll also notice with the character below, and others like her, that they rarely show more than the one sharp tooth. Adding both in a shot takes people right to vampire. Of course, that means picking and choosing your angles.)

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #23 on: July 06, 2018, 11:48:33 PM »

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did a rough redo (work in progress)

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #24 on: July 07, 2018, 12:26:13 AM »
The redo definitely looks a lot cleaner and more controlled. Can't wait to see the finished product.

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« Reply #25 on: July 07, 2018, 01:08:07 AM »
The redo definitely looks a lot cleaner and more controlled. Can't wait to see the finished product.
thanks,
it's gonna take awhile to finish
i still have to draw(body,wings)

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #26 on: July 09, 2018, 04:20:52 AM »
does look a lot nicer, well done. I hardly ever do redraws :P
looks like you have the style for the horns really good, and perfect crazy face :P
What program do you use to draw? (it is digital, right? I can't ever tell)

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« Reply #27 on: July 11, 2018, 12:46:51 AM »
does look a lot nicer, well done. I hardly ever do redraws :P
looks like you have the style for the horns really good, and perfect crazy face :P
What program do you use to draw? (it is digital, right? I can't ever tell)
thanks,yes it is digital,i use MediBang Paint Pro because a friend of mine recommended it to me

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #28 on: August 09, 2018, 04:40:03 PM »

Lilith v3.0
i just finished drawing the body and i wanted to color it
but when i looked at it, i wasn't very satisfied
so i'm gonna redo it,probably

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #29 on: August 09, 2018, 10:47:13 PM »
Well as suuper is discovering, there is value in finishing the works you don't feel are up to snuff. If nothing else it let's you practice that part of the process. And a piece changes continuously. By the time you're done, who knows what your opinion will be!

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