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Offline mhmd007

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my first attempt at drawing
« on: June 18, 2018, 05:10:43 PM »



« Last Edit: June 18, 2018, 11:13:22 PM by mhmd007 »

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #1 on: June 18, 2018, 07:52:44 PM »
Not a bad first attempt! It looks like you were experimenting with line weight. It's certainly worth looking into.

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #2 on: June 18, 2018, 09:01:35 PM »
I like it. Try adding more to the picture , like background to make it more interesting.

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #3 on: June 18, 2018, 11:13:55 PM »

i tried to draw a something sexy but i can't draw a head
and now i'm stuck with a headless body

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #4 on: June 19, 2018, 01:29:20 AM »
I mean it worked for Durarara. It seems to work fine for you here too (although it might be worth working on for future pieces).

If sexy stuff is something you plan on doing more of, you can totally follow the ecchi link in my signature to our sister-forum which primarily focuses on that kinda thing. It's not the most active place in the world, but with more artists on board, that might turn around.

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #5 on: June 19, 2018, 11:04:52 AM »
I like it. Try adding more to the picture , like background to make it more interesting.


thanks
i'm probably gonna redo the face and the hair
and leave the horns and the eyes as they are,probably

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #6 on: June 19, 2018, 11:31:46 AM »
I mean it worked for Durarara. It seems to work fine for you here too (although it might be worth working on for future pieces).

If sexy stuff is something you plan on doing more of, you can totally follow the ecchi link in my signature to our sister-forum which primarily focuses on that kinda thing. It's not the most active place in the world, but with more artists on board, that might turn around.



thanks
i'll definitely look into that

what i'm planning (for the manga) is
like girls and guns,explosions
the story is like if black lagoon and tokyo ghoul had a baby (i know to much ambition)
it involves action,psychological,tragedy

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #7 on: June 19, 2018, 11:37:26 AM »


my attempt at drawing guns
this is the  modified  m-45 combat rifle

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #8 on: June 19, 2018, 03:00:59 PM »
Far, far better than my first attempts.

To be honest I'm surprised you even know how to use a graphics tablet well enough  ;D :D LOL took me a good while to learn drawing well on paper let alone digitally.

I'm seeing attention to detail on the gun as opposed to the fingers and immediately shows me you like your guns, cool to know ;)
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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #9 on: June 19, 2018, 03:17:24 PM »
As just a heads up, you can quote multiple posts in the same reply by scrolling down and hitting the "insert quote" button, that way you don't have to make two posts for replying to different people.

The gun looks really good. I hate to be that person and ask, but are you tracing, by any chance? Not that it's a bad thing, of course; it's a learning tool like any other. It's just that if you are, it's nice to tell where you got your reference from.

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #10 on: June 19, 2018, 05:11:40 PM »
As just a heads up, you can quote multiple posts in the same reply by scrolling down and hitting the "insert quote" button, that way you don't have to make two posts for replying to different people.

The gun looks really good. I hate to be that person and ask, but are you tracing, by any chance? Not that it's a bad thing, of course; it's a learning tool like any other. It's just that if you are, it's nice to tell where you got your reference from.


i didn't knew that thanks
no,i've been watching non-stop tutorial on how to draw,but for reference(it's from
Military Motivation video)

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #11 on: June 19, 2018, 05:49:12 PM »
That's very impressive, then. You must be incredibly dedicated to your work. I've been hacking at this whole art thing since primary school and still don't get to that degree of detail in all my works.

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #12 on: June 19, 2018, 09:21:35 PM »
He seems very detail oriented. With all artists you can tell their best pictures are the ones on a subject they like(( the guns).
Keep up the good work :)

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #13 on: June 20, 2018, 03:58:51 PM »
He seems very detail oriented. With all artists you can tell their best pictures are the ones on a subject they like(( the guns).
Keep up the good work :)
Far, far better than my first attempts.

To be honest I'm surprised you even know how to use a graphics tablet well enough  ;D :D LOL took me a good while to learn drawing well on paper let alone digitally.

I'm seeing attention to detail on the gun as opposed to the fingers and immediately shows me you like your guns, cool to know ;)

all your feedbacks are helping a lot because sometime doubt myself


That's very impressive, then. You must be incredibly dedicated to your work. I've been hacking at this whole art thing since primary school and still don't get to that degree of detail in all my works.

will i try to be dedicated as much as possible if i ever want to make a manga,
i know i have a long long way ahead of me but i gotta start somewhere,
will i have my mom to thank she always tries to help me improve
here are some of her sketches


i think it's Sena Kashiwazaki

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Re: my first attempt at drawing
« Reply #14 on: June 20, 2018, 04:35:49 PM »
Second generation anime/manga fan huh? I see that you're using references while drawing, that's good. The only way to know if something looks right when drawn is to know how it looks in life. This applies to everything from anatomy to foreshortening. Keep it up.