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Author Topic: Swords Like Gods  (Read 1370 times)

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Re: Swords Like Gods
« Reply #30 on: May 28, 2018, 12:08:02 PM »
I think it's pretty great Lego, it's very impressive. Looking forward to more chapters. I want to make some fanart for this series!

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« Reply #31 on: May 28, 2018, 12:42:01 PM »
Haha that'd be awesome TEA, and thanks!

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« Reply #32 on: June 06, 2018, 06:26:00 AM »
Updated with Chapter 13

I'll jump to Digital Dragons for the next update, but I'm starting to miss working on Penance. I'm almost at the finish line with that one, so I might as well bring it closer to the end and take the opportunity to experiment a little. The contrast issue is still bugging me-

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« Reply #33 on: June 06, 2018, 10:42:42 PM »
Huh, well I can't saw I entirely know what's going on here anymore (damn my lack of understanding who all these people are). The brain extraction thing was neat though. Can't say I'll miss her.

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« Reply #34 on: June 07, 2018, 03:18:08 PM »
I savoured drawing that, really.

Yikes. My contrast and mish mash of characters strikes again. There's no salvaging it at this point. I've just got to file it away for future reference.

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« Reply #35 on: June 07, 2018, 04:17:59 PM »
I have to agree. Character sheets might be helpful

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« Reply #36 on: June 12, 2018, 09:08:24 AM »
Finally managed to catch up on this...

The story is pretty interesting. I think panels are easy to read for the most part, but your backgrounds are hit and miss on occasion. Sometimes it's a little hard to tell where the characters are in the scene, but it's not that bad I feel.

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And man my boy Mendez. His death was so dry it was actually kind of shocking. I literally thought he was fine until I had to go back and read those panels again. I'm not sure how I felt about his death. On one hand, it gives you that sense that no one is safe, which serves a story like this well, but at the same time I feel the moment didn't feel very impacting because of how it happened. A pacing issue I guess?

Overall, loving the story so far. You're really good with these dystopian type stories man. Keep at it! 

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« Reply #37 on: June 12, 2018, 06:38:32 PM »
Contrast, contrast man

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I straight up messed up that death scene yeah. They can be done properly even if they're short ala Attack on Titan but I'm really bad at long form manga narratives. Still learning haha

Um are you able to tell which characters are which? Like what happened in the latest chapter for example?

@Mahlua well theres a time-skipish moment so I might as well stick one in there.

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« Reply #38 on: June 14, 2018, 09:56:28 AM »
Yeah no problem with distinguishing characters from one another. Just can’t remember their names for the life of me though. Then again I’m pretty bad names in general, so...