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Author Topic: Darling be Home Soon  (Read 12601 times)

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Offline Coach Fro

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Re: Darling be Home Soon
« Reply #210 on: August 16, 2018, 08:43:22 PM »
Reading one of your older works as a writer will always be a cringe-fest, but inevitably helpful in the long run. I'm sure this story is full of mistakes that we didn't see back then, but regardless I still consider it a pretty good story.

Also, MR Tan vs C-Kret probably didn't translate well on paper at the time, but hey, when you imagine it in motion it reads pretty epic still. 
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Re: Darling be Home Soon
« Reply #211 on: August 16, 2018, 10:48:53 PM »
Yeah, and I admit that this is basically a lot of good ideas I executed poorly. I was still impressed with myself over C-Kret's whole deal even now. I just wish I had, I don't know, doubled the length of everything in the present of the story? Then interwove it with the flash back scenes or something.

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