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Offline Hikari

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« on: September 07, 2017, 10:41:45 PM »
Hi guys  :sheep:

I have uploaded 1% to MR on the topic for me v Chaos (I'll link it, the first three chapters are on there so rather than pissing off anyone by making 4 posts on here Ill just make the one), so far I'm behind in votes so I want to see where I've gone wrong and hopefully make the first chapters stronger. If you have any advice I would really appreciate the help, be as critical as you can. Also it'd be nice if you could take a look at Chaos' work on that post and vote which is better but you don't have to  :tongue:

Also wanna know what people think about the structure of the chapters as its the first series I've made in novel format rather than script. Anyone who has seen my previous works, you reckon sticking to script would be better or was the novel format good?

I will be making more chapters that I'll post on here but I want to make sure the first three are as solid as they can be. Thanks y'all

Enjoy and lemme know what I can improve on  :dance: -> http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php/topic,18573.msg287275.html#msg287275

Edit: Seemingly the Chaos V Hikari topic didn't help in improving 1% so hopefully here'll do. It'll also keep all the advice in one place. Chapter four will be uploaded at some point but expect EWZ first
« Last Edit: September 15, 2017, 11:07:06 PM by Hikari »

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« Reply #1 on: September 14, 2017, 06:09:04 PM »
Well apparently I lost due to character names so I'll be renaming them all
« Last Edit: September 14, 2017, 07:46:13 PM by Hikari »