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Shishi02's gallery
« on: July 17, 2017, 04:32:36 AM »
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My arts before the second wave of art fundamental practise.
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Re: Shishi02's gallery
« Reply #1 on: July 17, 2017, 10:00:40 AM »
I recognize a little something that's a problem for myself and a certain other member around here: the dreaded slant. It often happens to artists who have grown used to drawing not on a desk or easel or something stable, or in your case your tablet might be slightly slanted as you draw. It's especially prominent on the first.

Thankfully, that's a pretty easy fix, so long as you keep an eye on it. I can't really complain about anything else at the moment, although I question if the eye on the second image (the headshot) was meant to be slightly closed for a facial expression or if you simply use straight lines to guide where you place the eyes?
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« Reply #2 on: July 17, 2017, 06:02:55 PM »
I recognize a little something that's a problem for myself and a certain other member around here: the dreaded slant. It often happens to artists who have grown used to drawing not on a desk or easel or something stable, or in your case your tablet might be slightly slanted as you draw. It's especially prominent on the first.

Thankfully, that's a pretty easy fix, so long as you keep an eye on it. I can't really complain about anything else at the moment, although I question if the eye on the second image (the headshot) was meant to be slightly closed for a facial expression or if you simply use straight lines to guide where you place the eyes?

@MahluaandMilk thanks for helping out see some mistakes. the headshot guy is drawn from pencil. i must have not noticed its not leveled. I will keep that in mind.

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Re: Shishi02's gallery
« Reply #3 on: July 17, 2017, 06:08:48 PM »
All I see is a Yaoi admirer. But for realz, I like your coloring skills.

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« Reply #4 on: July 17, 2017, 06:17:53 PM »
@Forlorn-Serpent Thanks for visiting, my coloring skills are still as confusing as heck xD but theyre good for a 5 month practise. I am resuming my fundamentals again to learn more about what I lack to get improved.

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« Reply #5 on: July 17, 2017, 06:34:28 PM »
Only five months? Not bad at all.

I constantly find myself going back to the fundamentals. They can be so insightful. Just when I think I've mastered something, I go back to pick up another skill only to find that I was nowhere close. It's not a bad feeling. In fact, it can be pretty refreshing. Don't be afraid to show your sketches and fundamental practice drawings as well.
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« Reply #6 on: July 17, 2017, 06:40:37 PM »
@MahluaandMilk The fundamentals are in plain paper and mainly doodles of circles and lines. Maybe when I do the anatomy part, I can post it here. I think that's that fun part of fundamentals. I did tried learning it without a video instructor. But I found one for just $20USD and its lifetime. I didnt regret it because I will check on it again from time to time.

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« Reply #7 on: July 19, 2017, 01:47:01 AM »
Internet died so I can only guess how I am doing (if I'm doing well or not)
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« Reply #8 on: July 19, 2017, 10:38:55 AM »
The detailwork is nice, but I'd think that if you were expending energy that your body would be a little more "bent". Dynamic poses typically involve messing around with the S-curve. The girl shooting the beam out of the bubble for example, it'd make more sense if her stance were lowered so she could brace herself. As for the other girl...I'm not really sure. She seems so passive, but that might have been the intention.
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« Reply #9 on: July 19, 2017, 03:42:46 PM »
@mahluaandmilk thanks for the feedback. I was only focusing on looseness on my hand when I made this. I haven't done much gesture drawing since my internet is off for five days from now.

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« Reply #10 on: July 23, 2017, 04:45:24 AM »
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I haven't post much drawings I thought I could draw tonight's drawing.

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« Reply #11 on: July 23, 2017, 04:49:39 AM »
Nicela. It's great to see you don't shy away from hands and feet. Great job!

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« Reply #12 on: July 23, 2017, 04:53:25 AM »
@SlamJam: thanks they're still hard to draw though. Her pose is based from my friends's drawing. She was having trouble with the clothing folds on this dress so I drew it for her.

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Re: Shishi02's gallery
« Reply #13 on: July 23, 2017, 07:12:13 AM »
Hello Shishi, nice to meet you ^^ I like the hair and dress design! And it's beautiful to see so many aspiring artists trying to improve :) Keep it up!
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« Reply #14 on: July 23, 2017, 11:27:15 AM »
This is really good. Keep up the good work :)