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Author Topic: Dragon of Acadia concept art  (Read 1668 times)

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Re: Dragon of Acadia concept art
« Reply #30 on: July 16, 2017, 03:12:53 PM »
Artwork is phenomenal as usual, but why with the "u" instead of "you"? Everything else is like, professional quality and then just...boom. All professionalism lost. Not to mention the entire lack of commas...The speech bubbles and what goes on in them is definitely the weakest link, and it could be easily fixed. It messes up the flow. Another one just on the previous page is how fine gets line broken into f    ine. It's jarring and it snaps the reader out of the zone, kills the magic, you know? I really want to see this succeed, but it's hard to see when the little editing errors like that start piling up.
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Re: Dragon of Acadia concept art
« Reply #31 on: July 16, 2017, 03:44:24 PM »
i see thank u for the tip. we are only human after all we live and learn.

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Re: Dragon of Acadia concept art
« Reply #32 on: July 17, 2017, 04:09:02 AM »
This is you work SpartanG? i remember you post something about u not artist on this.....im just not sure if i should give advise or not...wonder if it will reach the artist.

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Re: Dragon of Acadia concept art
« Reply #33 on: July 17, 2017, 02:17:50 PM »
it is true im not the artist and im just the writer of the story but any advice for the artist will be noted and i will tell him.

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Re: Dragon of Acadia concept art
« Reply #34 on: August 04, 2017, 01:07:02 PM »
sorry for the lack of content here a new one

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Re: Dragon of Acadia concept art
« Reply #35 on: August 05, 2017, 01:49:14 AM »
Hey the news one look good, just how many mangayou guy were doing lol....i saw sci-fi character >>>>fantasy  >>>modern etc!!!

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Re: Dragon of Acadia concept art
« Reply #36 on: August 25, 2017, 10:55:07 AM »
Hey Update sorry for lack of content
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Re: Dragon of Acadia concept art
« Reply #37 on: August 30, 2017, 12:04:15 PM »
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Re: Dragon of Acadia concept art
« Reply #38 on: August 30, 2017, 02:44:08 PM »
magnifique! Keep it up  :heart: :heart:

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Re: Dragon of Acadia concept art
« Reply #39 on: September 08, 2017, 09:16:40 PM »
Sorry for the page delay but here it is
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Re: Dragon of Acadia concept art
« Reply #40 on: September 28, 2017, 10:10:57 AM »
update
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Re: Dragon of Acadia concept art
« Reply #41 on: October 23, 2017, 07:54:28 PM »
update page 8

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Re: Dragon of Acadia concept art
« Reply #42 on: October 26, 2017, 04:01:16 AM »
wow! that's really professional!

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Re: Dragon of Acadia concept art
« Reply #43 on: November 03, 2017, 01:22:12 PM »
update page 9

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Re: Dragon of Acadia concept art
« Reply #44 on: November 16, 2017, 08:01:36 PM »
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