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Author Topic: Genderbending Conundrums [DISCUSSION]  (Read 217 times)

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Genderbending Conundrums [DISCUSSION]
« on: April 19, 2017, 02:26:10 AM »
Welp, with the Beta version up and looking a little more sinister, I open the floor to any commentary. Most of my feedback from the class requested a little more character depth and motivation, and a little more clarity overall to people not very well versed in MRverse. I'll be speaking in a one-on-one with my professor about this in a week or so, but in the meantime, what would you guys maybe want some more of out of this story?

Also, huge note for my editing around adverbs, since my professor was pretty upfront on wanting me to change that. Good? Neutral? Negative effect on my writing style?

Most forms of constructive criticism welcome. Mostly just not the rude kind.
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