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Offline fakehero

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Battle Manga
« on: March 15, 2017, 09:47:10 PM »
back again!!

right now i'm trying to get back at drawing by doing 1-2 page a day, my goal right now is to finish this one shot this month



title - nothing yet
story - not sure about it yet
cover - n/a

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Page01

Page02

Page03

Page04

Page05




« Last Edit: March 28, 2017, 11:48:47 PM by fakehero »
manga pages https://goo.gl/AAodVu
timelapse drawings https://goo.gl/QO30Mt

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Re: Battle Manga
« Reply #1 on: March 15, 2017, 10:57:34 PM »
The art looks sweet! i'll love to see more of this. :thumbsup:

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Re: Battle Manga
« Reply #2 on: March 17, 2017, 07:18:57 PM »
@ KeanFox -  thanks man

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manga pages https://goo.gl/AAodVu
timelapse drawings https://goo.gl/QO30Mt

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Re: Battle Manga
« Reply #3 on: March 17, 2017, 07:26:41 PM »
I've never seen Focus being used on a manga page. Have you seen it done before? I know it's rampant in movies but i've never seen it on paper, except a photo  :tongue:

Pretty cool illustrations so far.
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Re: Battle Manga
« Reply #4 on: March 18, 2017, 12:35:32 AM »
This is really good I think the story could be called Toushin daishu  its what pop in my head when you said you need a name for it. Not sure what the word I was looking for when I said daishu.

But anyways Toushin can translate to body proportions or sword blade.  But I think of the name of Toushin is like  bleach for the bleach anime it's kinda of a odd name. In a way.

The one shot you should try to think of it as a pitch for a battle series. Manga. And if its well received. Then you'll know if you should start the battle series. Also I recommend like publishing you one shot to medibang they say they will give you actual advice etc.

So just think if a battle series in mind and have this one shot capture the essence or the plot or something. Well look at manga series out there. Many series manga started out as a one shot.  And the one shot was somewhat different from the series.

They kept the characters in the one shot just change the story.
Like the one shot of bleach rukia was like a fairy or something she was small.  Check it out somewhere.

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Re: Battle Manga
« Reply #5 on: March 25, 2017, 01:40:29 PM »
woah thats some awesome art. I wonder who landed there!!

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Re: Battle Manga
« Reply #6 on: March 26, 2017, 03:38:30 PM »
Really great work. You're a fan of Hamada Yoshikazu, yes? You use the same music in your videos and have a similar style  :D Can you send me a preset of the inking pen you use? You have it really similar to how Yoshikazu has it set, and I've wanted to try it out for the longest time.

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Re: Battle Manga
« Reply #7 on: March 29, 2017, 12:04:43 AM »
@Forlorn Serpent - thanks man, yea I've seen it done once and it really looked cool and i wanted to try it

@Shinpi Tekina - thanks for the advice man, i'll keep that in mind

@Walter B - thanks

@Ryan - lol, yea i'm fan, he's fight scene is really awesome XD the pen settings is really basic, i'm using manga studio 4 its just pen thickness set to 70% the lower the rougher it gets and direction set to random, here video link https://goo.gl/9rfvWP

here is the file link if you want its the y pen1 i'm using works on manga studio 4 and manga studio 5/clips studio paint
https://goo.gl/4TRZiW

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manga pages https://goo.gl/AAodVu
timelapse drawings https://goo.gl/QO30Mt

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Re: Battle Manga
« Reply #8 on: March 29, 2017, 12:50:51 AM »
Awesome!
« Last Edit: June 04, 2017, 03:26:47 AM by Walter B »

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Re: Battle Manga
« Reply #9 on: April 09, 2017, 04:43:23 PM »
the anatomy is really good especially on the masked guy in the last panel--great muscle detail!