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Author Topic: Blue Mist  (Read 4447 times)

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Offline Corycaly

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Re: Blue Mist
« Reply #15 on: July 19, 2009, 04:53:38 PM »
A  very good beginning!

It's very clean and detailed. I'm impatient to see the next pages!

How long do you take to end a page?

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Re: Blue Mist
« Reply #16 on: July 20, 2009, 11:45:44 PM »
the characters shorts on the cover are somewhat like sora's on kh2(no offense)
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Re: Blue Mist
« Reply #17 on: July 21, 2009, 03:26:43 AM »
A  very good beginning!

It's very clean and detailed. I'm impatient to see the next pages!

How long do you take to end a page?
if i get lucky i can finish two in one day

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Re: Blue Mist
« Reply #18 on: July 21, 2009, 03:29:35 AM »
the characters shorts on the cover are somewhat like sora's on kh2(no offense)
yea i think they do....
but his outfit is going to change...
actually the whole story is going to change so im gonna repost new pages
me and the author had a talk and yea thats the result

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Re: Blue Mist
« Reply #19 on: July 23, 2009, 08:46:29 PM »
....last time i change this....v.v

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Re: Blue Mist
« Reply #20 on: August 01, 2009, 08:22:38 PM »
Concept is pretty cool

Decent start

The art style is very stylized, but not bad.

I'd need to see more before i could judge for real

From what I'd seen I would say 5/10 (Not a professional critic)

Keep in mind this is just from what I've seen
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Re: Blue Mist
« Reply #21 on: August 05, 2009, 03:13:40 PM »
Dude I actually like this concept. I think some of the wording in the prologue can be tweaked to sound smoother but overall I like the idea. The websites in your sig is that where we can read more?????
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