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Author Topic: YoUr EyEs Gallery work~  (Read 1492 times)

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Re: Unohana's work!
« Reply #15 on: July 25, 2017, 02:44:14 PM »
dat fur coat......it hard to draw that, u have some gut to put it in

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Re: Unohana's work!
« Reply #16 on: July 25, 2017, 03:25:00 PM »
She appears to get rather...thin there in the middle. The face, on the other hand, is fantastic for being at the angle that it's in.


I know, tbh, I think coming back after such a long period of tine to drawing, made me somewhat more sluggish and probably too lenient over the details~

dat fur coat......it hard to draw that, u have some gut to put it in


Arigato~
It truly was kinda hard to draw, but I used it more to practice around the details and body line training, like I said tho, my wrist is kinda sore and I cannot keep drawing for more than 30 minutes.

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Re: Unohana's work!
« Reply #17 on: August 23, 2017, 11:32:21 AM »
Ok, training some more and so I did start a manga, here goes~


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My wrist handled that much pain for it but I am quite satisfied~ Yaay!
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Re: Unohana's work!
« Reply #18 on: August 23, 2017, 01:39:38 PM »
Excellent work on the variety of face types. Everything looks super crisp for being in pencil. Some of the speech bubbles are a little hard to read, but I can gather a lot from the expressions. Seriously, though, take care of your wrist. Hopefully you don't wind up overstressing it.
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Re: Unohana's work!
« Reply #19 on: August 24, 2017, 11:44:23 AM »
Excellent work on the variety of face types. Everything looks super crisp for being in pencil. Some of the speech bubbles are a little hard to read, but I can gather a lot from the expressions. Seriously, though, take care of your wrist. Hopefully you don't wind up overstressing it.


Thank you MahluaandMilk


I had various angles for each but, since it is still a draft for a manga that I have start~

I won't overdo it, I'll try taking at least a week off and rest it up a little.

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Re: Unohana's work!
« Reply #20 on: September 03, 2017, 02:10:22 AM »
That's an interesting way to offer people revenge. Like Mahlua said great variation on the faces and the like.

And yes. Rest it up. That pain can add multiplier damage and mess things right up.

Love the pages!

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« Reply #21 on: September 05, 2017, 12:02:43 PM »
That's an interesting way to offer people revenge. Like Mahlua said great variation on the faces and the like.

And yes. Rest it up. That pain can add multiplier damage and mess things right up.

Love the pages!


Thank you~!

I take rest while drawing after each 10-15 minutes, I try not to do "rushes" to much.

Thank you again!

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Re: Unohana's work!
« Reply #22 on: September 12, 2017, 03:26:41 PM »
I am starting a manga for the forum! I will post the character during upcoming weeks~

Thank you for all your supports!

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Re: Unohana's work!
« Reply #23 on: October 06, 2017, 03:45:49 PM »
Next week, I will be posting a preview of my manga~!

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Re: Unohana's work!
« Reply #24 on: October 06, 2017, 04:17:49 PM »
looking forward to it!
just a thought though, i think your work would look better if you drew on plain paper, that way the lines of the page dont get in the way. if you find it useful for guidelines, you can always put a sheet underneath the plain paper and it will show though.

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Re: Unohana's work!
« Reply #25 on: October 31, 2017, 10:55:19 AM »
looking forward to it!
just a thought though, i think your work would look better if you drew on plain paper, that way the lines of the page dont get in the way. if you find it useful for guidelines, you can always put a sheet underneath the plain paper and it will show though.


I should but, since these are mostly rough drafts, I try to take every help that I would get out of of the lines, eventually, I will make them on a blank paper when I redo them~
Arigatou~

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Re: Unohana's work!
« Reply #26 on: October 31, 2017, 10:59:23 AM »

I did two different previews for my story, If you could tell me which one of them is better, I would really appreciate it!


Opening 1:







The second one would be this one:







I did not think that I would be done before going away but, I guess I did~


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« Reply #27 on: November 01, 2017, 05:11:57 AM »
the first one has a lot better flow i think. there is a lot more variety in panelling and camera angles.
might be good to up the contrast or adjust the levels on your pictures after scanning or photoing i found it quite hard to read the text :/

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Re: Unohana's work!
« Reply #28 on: November 01, 2017, 11:50:31 AM »
the first one has a lot better flow i think. there is a lot more variety in panelling and camera angles.
might be good to up the contrast or adjust the levels on your pictures after scanning or photoing i found it quite hard to read the text :/


I see what you mean, when I took those pictures the text bubbles was much more "cleaner" but, once I had upload them, the quality reduced a little...

I will try keeping it in mind from now on tho~

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Re: Unohana's work!
« Reply #29 on: November 01, 2017, 11:52:44 AM »
you might find the quality is increased if you ink your pencil lines, and it will make it easier to edit on computer as well. do you have plain paper to draw on? the lined paper will make the quality look lower automatically as they split the drawing up :/

but looking forward to seeing more story :P