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Author Topic: Cosmic Thief Silvia  (Read 3237 times)

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Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
« Reply #15 on: March 06, 2018, 05:25:37 AM »
WHOA! 69 Pages of interesting dialogue and those backgrounds! I wish I could do that. Great shading, solid technical work. I'd seriously enjoy reading this in hard copy form too. I seriously need to learn some tips and tricks from you, stardust.

Pretty charming story there. Two questions is the song correct when it says 'the rythm has took over'?  I wasn't sure how the line went. And secondly is that Ipod for real the newest model or an antique? Hahaha. I saw the jukeboxes in the next page so I figured the expo was showing off music from the older eras, or that the older eras are IN for some reason or another in this universe.

I wish I had such an encyclopeadic knowledge of films and actors and the like like Silvia did. Interesting conversation.

I guess she's about to go out to kick butt. I wonder why Satoru chose her.

Serious props on getting so much page work done. Always great to see manga done here.


P.S Haha Miss Tezuka. I saw what you did there with the reporters' name.

*Blush*I feel like Im still learning myself, so when someone actually says summin like that, its certainly quite the compliment ^^ Seriously, thank you so much.

Yep thats correct on the song lyric. The idea with Silvia is its not definite what kinda of universe this is. I dont like future stories much as there almost always WRONG(by now we ought to have flying cars for example). So I like to leave it ambigious, you the reader decide. IS this the future, an unknown outerspace a totally diffrent reality altogether? Either way though it is a sci fi story. And regardin the old tehcnolodgy, well some people enjoy retro ^^ Like how girls wear dress in Rockabilly dresses now, not to mention them selling records and players again(heck Ive seen them in supermarkets). It can be cool. For example, if you look at the girls transfomation cell phones? I did them in the style of flip phones, BUT inside its touch screen like an Iphone.

I watch a lot of movies and suc myself :P I wnated to give her character a bit more interest, infact I wnana give all my characters summin so there not so 2D, magical girls are pretty much like this(like dumber shallower knock offs of Sailor Moon), which is boring. Give em a personality ya know. Music and movies seemed a good match

Thanks ^^ Got a few more to post, hope you'll read it right to the finish

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Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
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Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
« Reply #18 on: April 20, 2018, 05:43:29 PM »










Well we now know whats Satorus up to, who the true villian is, and why Silvia was choosen. At least i hope its an explaination that makes sense. Cant be any crazier than most magical girl stuff

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Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
« Reply #19 on: April 20, 2018, 07:30:35 PM »
It can't be crazier indeed, and that's why it's sort of crazy, and that's why it's awesome haha. You don't ever see detectives get involved in this sort of business, but not only is he invovled, he's actually the cause of the whole magical girl situation. Usually there's a nefarious/totally innocent but dumb mascot creature that's responsible but yeah that's a nice subversion.

Great art there as always, keep it up! I can't get over the toning!

Are you done with the chapter or have you just posted what you have so far?

Either way looking forward to more


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Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
« Reply #20 on: April 25, 2018, 09:18:32 AM »
It can't be crazier indeed, and that's why it's sort of crazy, and that's why it's awesome haha. You don't ever see detectives get involved in this sort of business, but not only is he invovled, he's actually the cause of the whole magical girl situation. Usually there's a nefarious/totally innocent but dumb mascot creature that's responsible but yeah that's a nice subversion.

Great art there as always, keep it up! I can't get over the toning!

Are you done with the chapter or have you just posted what you have so far?

Either way looking forward to more

A bit of both. It IS finished, but Im posting two pages a week on my accounts, with bulk pots here every now and then. Just a few more to go then.

Most ideas I came up with when I was a kid, and theyve really evolved and changed form there origins. Silvia is a lot darker than I originally intended, I wanna go more a Batman route with the stories. For a kids show that was quite dark. Guns, drugs, explosions, murder. Definelty a lot less sugar coated than most. So far I feel Im managing that route. I hope I can continue to do the stories and give it further life. Keeping up the will to draw is frankly HARDDDDD

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Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
« Reply #21 on: April 25, 2018, 10:40:50 AM »
That's definitely a mood alright. Although there is always one way to get the juice flowing again, and that is to have a lot of stress and conflict in your life. (Sounds lovely doesn't it?) But seriously, try to harness the hardships, because apparently humans react with bursts of creativity when challenged, even if they aren't challenged in a way that directly related to your work. (Assuming you are, of course, human)

Best of luck!

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« Reply #22 on: May 15, 2018, 06:31:29 AM »








Annnnd thats the END! PHEW! Almost 70 pages long, this turned out to be a lot more work than anything I've worked on, but I did it. It was hard but fun and Im glad to have brought these characters to life. I hope in the future I can build there world even more. Hope everyone enjoyed it

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Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
« Reply #23 on: May 15, 2018, 10:08:18 AM »
Congratulations on the completion! I know you've worked long and hard on your stuff, and of course I enjoy feeling the passion behind the smooth, polished outlook.

Now let's see if you can send it somewhere and get published, because good lord yes.

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« Reply #24 on: May 18, 2018, 07:23:41 AM »
Congratulations on the completion! I know you've worked long and hard on your stuff, and of course I enjoy feeling the passion behind the smooth, polished outlook.

Now let's see if you can send it somewhere and get published, because good lord yes.


That is like the nicest thing anyones said to me  :D THANK YOU!

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Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
« Reply #25 on: May 22, 2018, 06:27:04 AM »
*you're a minor

Yeah I hate that typo too.


What Mahlua said basically, stardust. You've really made something here. Best of luck with it, and congrats!

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Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
« Reply #26 on: May 24, 2018, 03:43:57 AM »
This was an awesome read!
congrats on your chapter, I adored the tones, the characters, and the action as well. You're great at this.
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Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
« Reply #27 on: May 28, 2018, 12:10:23 PM »
Really inspiring, loved it! It made me very nostalgic for some old manga I used to read as a kid. Keep it up!

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Re: Cosmic Thief Silvia
« Reply #28 on: May 28, 2018, 02:14:47 PM »
I don't really know what to say that hasn't already been said, but it was a very good read, visually and story-wise. Keep it up.
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« Reply #29 on: June 15, 2018, 05:53:03 AM »
Im really happy with the positive response Silvia has been met with ^^ When something youve drawn is enjoyed by others it gives you the best feeling.

Thank you everyone and, I hope I can create the world further. Others actually wanting to see it too certainly is encouraging