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Author Topic: Overdrive!  (Read 2545 times)

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Offline suupertramp

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Re: Overdrive!
« Reply #30 on: March 15, 2017, 04:35:18 PM »
the celebrate by celebrating was deliberate, the lack of sense was the point of that joke, but thanks for pointing it out

the whole point of this manga was so that i could learn how to draw manga, so at the point where i figured out how to tone the hair i figured there wasnt much point in doing it for the rest, it was just taking up time. in my serious manga though i will be more consistent :P

i used Sketchup for the 3d scenery and items, its very good for quick renders.

glad you liked the jokes, i do have a second chapter planned but just coursework is more important haha :P

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« Reply #31 on: March 25, 2017, 02:50:43 PM »
honestly... THIS IS AMAZING. The poses are well done and There are good characters, and everything! I really couldn't think of criticism unless I started nit picking..

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« Reply #32 on: March 26, 2017, 09:14:40 AM »
thanks! i appreciate it!
although if there are things you feel you want to mention, dont hold back!
if you can see something that i missed, then it can help me improve :P

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« Reply #33 on: April 09, 2017, 05:54:54 PM »
there are some really good jokes in here--basically nuking the 4th wall for the entire introductory chapter was a good tactic that was pretty unique from where I'm standing (made me think of Gintama, which is probably the most *unique* in its joke writing)

The personalities of the characters also juxtapose very nicely

You've got a great concept here that I really enjoyed! I hope to see more!