wow coming along really nicely, and well done for keeping up such a good pace as well, its hard to keep churning out pages like that :P
story is quite interesting so far, and sort of funny as well.
regarding this page:
-good work on backgrounds, but your diagonal split panels are quite hard to orientate myself, its hard to instantly know where the ground is. i would recommend even if the panel has diagonal borders, draw your panels aligned vertically.
how that i look at it, one panel in the split reads one way, and the other panel reads diagonally the other way, so you have to twists your head twice to read/look at it.
also, on a completely diagonal split, i dont know which panel to read first. see my drawing which explains a bit better perhaps:
of course, drawing a panel at an angle is not wrong, i think it just didnt work in that instance with the diagonal split at the same time.
well done so far, and i look forward to reading more, even though i typically dont like music manga :P