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Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« on: March 19, 2016, 10:55:14 AM »
Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery


Thanks for viewing my gallery.

Each Story Concept Art will have its unique Color Name title. Scroll until you see the story character concept art you want to see.

Each of my stories is in the Manga Creation section will have concept art.

Make sure to scroll down to Demons Vs. Aliens concept art. I will add more pictures when I have time.
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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #1 on: March 19, 2016, 11:11:39 AM »
Miscellaneous art

A short collection of some of my drawings. Some are in pencil. Others are done with a drawing tablet. Just want make you guys know I am a writer. I prefer to write.

I prefer to draw women in case you miss it.

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Hand drawn Meiko Shiraki. referenced not traced.
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Here's another attempt to color and shade.

It is a Wet T shirt drawing. NSFW trigger.
With blended color and shading.

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Hard line shading and coloring.
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What are your tips on how i should improve this method?

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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #2 on: March 21, 2016, 10:05:28 PM »
You're already tops in my book just by that drawing of one of the underground student council's characters  :clapping:

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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #3 on: March 27, 2016, 10:00:27 AM »
I prefer to draw women in case you miss it.
yup, me too :P
i like the first coloured one, is that from Haganai? the art style seems very familiar :P
theres a considerable variety of skill levels on your drawings, are they drawn over a long peroid of time or something, because some are hugely better than other :P
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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #4 on: March 27, 2016, 10:47:24 AM »
Which one do you guys think suck?
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« Reply #5 on: March 27, 2016, 11:00:12 AM »
I prefer to draw women in case you miss it.
yup, me too :P
i like the first coloured one, is that from Haganai? the art style seems very familiar :P
theres a considerable variety of skill levels on your drawings, are they drawn over a long peroid of time or something, because some are hugely better than other :P

The first one is Yozora from haganai. She's my favorite. 

The sketches are obviously done by hand. They were just five minute drawing sessions so i could put something in the gallery. The others i did on a drawing tablet. i use the wacom one.

The base drawings are the ones i put more effort in, but they are still base drawings. I want to make them into line art so i can find someone to color and draw them better.

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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #6 on: March 27, 2016, 06:35:56 PM »
That woman with the glasses is very nice

None of them suck  ;)

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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #7 on: April 01, 2016, 09:07:26 AM »
Western Anime Idea  Don't have a title for it.

All Concept Art

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« Reply #8 on: April 01, 2016, 10:25:59 AM »
I like the hair design

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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #9 on: April 03, 2016, 06:48:34 AM »
Demons Vs. Aliens

This post will contain every Demons Vs Aliens character design. You don't have to bother critiquing, this is just concept art for any mangaka who is willing to take up the project. Feel free to read my story in the Manga Creation section.

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Version 2


Lili (Pronounced Li-li)
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Alien Girl #1 Need funny name, any suggestions?
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Girl Scientist   I don't have a name yet
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Military Woman (i don't have a name yet)
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« Reply #10 on: April 07, 2016, 03:15:44 PM »
funny, i thought i commented on this one already,oh well :P

i like the style of the wings, sometimes when drawing wings it can be hard to make them look properly attached to the character, but they real feel a part of her so thats nice. the unusual additions of solid black lines is a bit strange, is it a WIP?
the proportions are fairly good, but i think the upper body is a bit too big, or the hips are too small, she looks a bit top heavy. also not sure if you went off the page for the feet or not, but try to avoid not drawing hands and feet, its good practice.
but nice overall, i really like the wings :P
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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #11 on: April 08, 2016, 01:04:26 AM »
The Quest Concept Art

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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #12 on: April 08, 2016, 03:48:49 AM »
funny, i thought i commented on this one already,oh well :P

i like the style of the wings, sometimes when drawing wings it can be hard to make them look properly attached to the character, but they real feel a part of her so thats nice. the unusual additions of solid black lines is a bit strange, is it a WIP?
the proportions are fairly good, but i think the upper body is a bit too big, or the hips are too small, she looks a bit top heavy. also not sure if you went off the page for the feet or not, but try to avoid not drawing hands and feet, its good practice.
but nice overall, i really like the wings :P

the black lines where just corrections from my drawing tablet. I didn't have time to outline it but i wanted some comments. What does WIP mean?

Do you think the colored version still has that weird proportion look? I changed the head because i hated the way it looked.

The feet are so freaking hard. I practice though. I can do hands, just not feet. Probably because i use my own hands as reference but i can't really use my feet.

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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #13 on: April 08, 2016, 03:54:00 AM »
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WIP means work in progress ie. something you are still working on and not complete. i wasnt sure if you were making the whole thing digital or not because of the extra lines.

the coloured version doesnt seem as badly proportioned, perhaps because the shading gives it more form. again practice makes perfect
haha yeah you cant draw your won feet i have had the same problem when drawing. make sure to get pictures of reference to build up your knowledge for drawing from memory :P
feet are hard, especially because they dont always look right in real life, sometimes you cant win :P keep it up youll get there :P

but i love the coloured one, very nicely coloured, looks very believable :P
love the wings even more now with shading :P
cant wait to see more of your drawings :P
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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #14 on: April 11, 2016, 07:51:10 AM »
The Snow Fox and the Mountain


This is a work in progress. I just need to fix the coloring and the shading and anything you guys might suggest.

SUSIE Fan art. Obviously sexualized for no reason.
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