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Author Topic: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery  (Read 8164 times)

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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #15 on: April 11, 2016, 08:29:03 AM »
This is a work in progress. I just need to fix the coloring and the shading and anything you guys might suggest.

The pose of this character is quite interesting and looks quite hard to draw :D Her right arm is not quite right; you should move it more to the right, think about where her shoulder is from the way her back is curved and draw the arm from there. If instead, you were trying to make the arm bent, then her forearm is too long. The forearm is also too narrow at the wrist. I think you could also shade the inside of the ears a little more with the darker colour, but just a suggestion. Good job so far!  :thumbsup:

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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #16 on: April 11, 2016, 08:52:08 PM »
nice artwork u got there...the color is good..well u just need to keep practice on it, especially the anatomy (well it's quite challenging of course..sometimes I still make it inappropriate too as well><)
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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #17 on: April 11, 2016, 09:19:11 PM »
That is an interesting pose

I like the pawns in her feet

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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #18 on: April 12, 2016, 11:35:37 AM »

The pose of this character is quite interesting and looks quite hard to draw :D Her right arm is not quite right; you should move it more to the right, think about where her shoulder is from the way her back is curved and draw the arm from there. If instead, you were trying to make the arm bent, then her forearm is too long. The forearm is also too narrow at the wrist. I think you could also shade the inside of the ears a little more with the darker colour, but just a suggestion. Good job so far!  :thumbsup:

Thank you for your feedback. I will take everything you said into consideration. I will update this image soon.

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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #19 on: April 12, 2016, 11:41:06 AM »
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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #20 on: April 12, 2016, 02:16:03 PM »
I like the first more  ;D

Keep it up! Nice stuff u have  ;)


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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #21 on: April 13, 2016, 06:22:27 AM »
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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #22 on: April 13, 2016, 08:08:22 AM »
Nice legs and pose!

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« Reply #23 on: April 13, 2016, 09:55:45 AM »
Very lovely...nice pose and the color too as well><
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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #24 on: April 15, 2016, 09:35:19 AM »
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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #25 on: April 15, 2016, 09:36:53 AM »
Tricks and Treats Concept Art

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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #26 on: April 15, 2016, 10:05:25 AM »
Feels weird to complain about such but I feel the bust size gets in the way of the character a bit. Still, nicely done! What's the name of the second one? Are those pincers like cybernetic implants or something?

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« Reply #27 on: April 15, 2016, 10:18:32 AM »
Feels weird to complain about such but I feel the bust size gets in the way of the character a bit. Still, nicely done! What's the name of the second one? Are those pincers like cybernetic implants or something?

I know i have a problem with breasts. can't help but i will try to avoid making them huge.

The second one is a spider girl with four arms. It's not as detailed as i would like it to be but this illustration is just for concept purposes. The breasts are what shoot outs webs. If you look at my collaboration art section thread, you will see other spider girls that i have put and another one Masda submitted. 

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« Reply #28 on: April 15, 2016, 11:34:09 AM »
I like that spider girl! Web shooting titties I like that too!!!  :D :D :D :D

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Re: Forlorn Serpent's Art Gallery
« Reply #29 on: April 16, 2016, 12:55:36 AM »
My Principal is a Zombie! Concept Art

This was drawn by Petetoy. I just colored it in.

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