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Author Topic: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )  (Read 16038 times)

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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
« Reply #30 on: May 17, 2009, 01:04:12 PM »


Sheesh, the proportions in this one are not what I'm used to. >.<
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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
« Reply #31 on: May 17, 2009, 01:06:29 PM »
not bad! proportions are the only problems i see

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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
« Reply #32 on: May 17, 2009, 01:25:42 PM »
Face Looks perfect and I like your drawings metal hand too. Only problem is proportions I think.

Good to see you did post in workshops. Take part other drawing workshops too when you have time. Also comment about others drawings too. That,s the whole idea here sharing advice and pointing out errors.

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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
« Reply #33 on: May 17, 2009, 01:42:41 PM »
Well, the only real comment I had was for you, Hasith. Chill out on the paper, man. It didn't do anything to you.  :D
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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
« Reply #34 on: May 17, 2009, 03:08:29 PM »
awesome! a few things are kind of off... and the head looks a bit out of proportion. but other than that he looks great!!  :JC_cheesy:
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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
« Reply #35 on: May 17, 2009, 04:07:10 PM »
Good work!

The metal arm is well detailed and I like the face because it's manly and serious.

I'll remake mine in two days, once I am less stressed.

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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
« Reply #36 on: May 18, 2009, 11:01:25 AM »
@Hannah: Like everyone else I really like the way you did the Arm, =D love the detail, The eyes were just too far apart which in my opinion is always Edwards problem even the professional drawings his eyes just look too far apart to me haha.

@Cory: Woot! I liek the Sketchy detail you put in yours I agree with Hasith on the proportions but Honestly I liek the original touch on the character. So the sketchyness was a plus for me.

@ Sai: I really like the way the face came out. Compared to the head the hands are too small and the line of action seems to change once you reach his waste.If you cut the head down a bit maybe in photoshop or something I think everything would look just fine =D.
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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
« Reply #37 on: May 31, 2009, 05:34:08 PM »
Been busy Lately but finnaly got this one done...took @1hr.45min off and on from start to finnish.


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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
« Reply #38 on: May 31, 2009, 08:17:51 PM »
everythings like perfect except for the face. the eyes are all off

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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
« Reply #39 on: May 31, 2009, 09:59:50 PM »
 :o wow... great!!  :D but the eyes do look kind of off...
but i liked the way you drew the lips.
and the color version is...wow
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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
« Reply #40 on: May 31, 2009, 11:08:08 PM »
@  Dragon : As whole character it is a great drawing, Only 2 things I see bit off are right side eye and hand (which was on hip). Also colored one is great ! Thanks for posting both !

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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
« Reply #41 on: June 01, 2009, 12:37:20 AM »
Your Welcome, and thanks.

I know...im still having a good bit of trouble with hands and faces...I cant seem to get the proportions or perspectives correct..Ive always had a good bit of trouble in those areas.

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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
« Reply #42 on: June 24, 2009, 10:08:04 PM »

Here's mine ^^  I did this while watching Casino Royale, so I'm expecting critics on proportion ^^



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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
« Reply #43 on: June 24, 2009, 10:10:01 PM »
Also, Mantis Dragon, I have the same problems ^^ Whyu are the most looked at portions of the body the hardest to draw?

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Re: Manga Drawing Workshop - Edward Elric ( Fullmetal Alchemist )
« Reply #44 on: June 25, 2009, 03:07:37 AM »
AnimeDoodler I like the metal arm of your character. Maybe neck is bit too long.