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Author Topic: Death By Ex-Girlfriend (Book of Revenge soon, comrades!)  (Read 132097 times)

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Re: Death By Ex-Girlfriend (Book of Revenge soon, comrades!)
« Reply #540 on: November 12, 2020, 01:46:58 AM »
Always exciting to see the work alive and well OGHM!  ;D
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Re: Death By Ex-Girlfriend (Book of Revenge soon, comrades!)
« Reply #541 on: December 31, 2020, 10:35:53 PM »
Thanks Op!

I've secretly been working on everything this whole time lol Senkumo War Stories has evolved quite a bit and Death by Ex-Girlfriend has been getting some major story changes. Lucrezia was alluded to in a throwaway chapter in this thread and she's now been worked into the story fully. Pretty much every arc is getting a face lift and boob job.

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Re: Death By Ex-Girlfriend (Book of Revenge soon, comrades!)
« Reply #542 on: January 01, 2021, 02:57:14 AM »
How exciting! It's always nice to patch things up when you can. I recommend going easy on the surgery. Things should not go to waste, and too much filling could make the fill-ins look like fillers, if you get my drift...  :sure:
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Re: Death By Ex-Girlfriend (Book of Revenge soon, comrades!)
« Reply #543 on: January 01, 2021, 08:36:33 AM »
weird I thought I commented.
awesome illustrations there, I definitely love the cute one but the epic 2 halves one is also pretty nice.

As I haven't started on a large project of my own yet I can't comment on how much editing should be done or not, but ideally you want to sign off a project as complete at some point, otherwise as you skill grows you will always find more things to improve. I experience this with my art but once a drawing is inked and coloured then it's done, I wont try and fix up anything, and move on. But that's because I want to produce a lot of work. If you dont have another project lined up then there's no reason to rush or to sign it off, but all the same don't edit it indefinitely :P
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Re: Death By Ex-Girlfriend (Book of Revenge soon, comrades!)
« Reply #544 on: January 02, 2021, 02:59:35 PM »
That's... actually pretty good! Despite the fact I had to read with one eye open I really love their personalities and hilariousness. It really took me by surprise when Izanami showed up. This had me grinning like a fool. I hope you continue.

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Re: Death By Ex-Girlfriend (Book of Revenge soon, comrades!)
« Reply #545 on: January 02, 2021, 09:36:00 PM »
Thanks Op and Suuper, lord knows I easily get trapped in analysis paralysis and end up not doing anything because of constant reworks  :ohmy: As was the case for Senkumo War Stories. I had to pull away and just be happy with what I worked on. And this is DbEG's first major face lift and I intend for it to be the last. I've had a lot more time to think about how I want everything to connect.

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That's... actually pretty good! Despite the fact I had to read with one eye open I really love their personalities and hilariousness. It really took me by surprise when Izanami showed up. This had me grinning like a fool. I hope you continue.

Glad you liked it! This story is actually pretty much complete, by the way. It's got nine whole arcs, so knock yourself out. I'm currently in the middle of editing/reworking the series as well. I keep my chapters stashed on Royal Road, which I don't like to talk about here because I don't want to direct traffic away from Mangaraiders.  :ninja:

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Re: Death By Ex-Girlfriend (Book of Revenge soon, comrades!)
« Reply #546 on: September 13, 2021, 02:56:37 PM »
Pssst. Psssssssst.

I've been working very hard and in secrecy. Remember how I said getting all the Death by Ex-Girlfriend volumes ready would be a mountain of hard work? Well, it was. And I still have to rewrite the final volume.

However, Aika Crisis, War Cloud, Dawn and Dusk, Satori Effect, Himushi Redemption, and Inari Standoff are all available now (physical)! I'm only going to have these up until mid-October, but feel free to grab any of these until then.

The story has changed A LOT since I've been gone. I can only liken it to how Demon Souls was treated  :clapping: I have a feeling you guys will love it.

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Re: Death By Ex-Girlfriend (Book of Revenge soon, comrades!)
« Reply #547 on: September 14, 2021, 10:23:51 AM »
Yo OhGod! How's it been?



Aside from all the hard work of course! Good job on getting these into a physical form!

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Re: Death By Ex-Girlfriend (Book of Revenge soon, comrades!)
« Reply #548 on: September 16, 2021, 12:05:03 PM »
It's been wild is what it's been lol

I just like to disappear sometimes and work on stuff. But I realized I left everyone out of the loop and felt weird since the series started here.

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Re: Death By Ex-Girlfriend (Book of Revenge soon, comrades!)
« Reply #549 on: September 16, 2021, 12:43:24 PM »
What can we say? Life happens. Sometimes things pull your attention away from what you used to do.

Personally I use MR for my WIPs since I feel I could freely update things in a close knit group without worrying about becoming too critical of my work. To be consistent in writing, putting away your inner critic allows you to write trash, and only after you collected, can you sift through it and find the rare keepers.
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Re: Death By Ex-Girlfriend (Book of Revenge soon, comrades!)
« Reply #550 on: September 17, 2021, 11:28:07 AM »
Don't worry man, we'll just toss it onto the pile of successful stories that came from humble beginnings here on our little home on the internet  :tongue: Just glad you're doing well (if not maybe a little worn out, lol). I will definitely be picking up a copy of book 1. Would that I could buy them all, but I'm getting married in a year and cash is at a premium  :noidea:

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