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Re: Untitled
« Reply #15 on: April 15, 2009, 12:36:05 AM »
Plot is ok but expand it and make it detailed. You have to sort of the stroy and then you can add dialogs. You see alll those Famous Manga have strong wel built stroylines. Since you are very good at dialogs (its superb) you need to spend more time for this !

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« Reply #16 on: April 15, 2009, 02:02:32 AM »
oh...ok... thanks! ill be working on it!
I really appreciate the advice!!
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« Reply #17 on: May 14, 2009, 03:57:14 PM »
soo... i have a (i guess) deeper plot. i just have to type it up. i also made character (um...)profiles. (if that is what they are called)... but... i have to type it up... :sick: (i hate typing)
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« Reply #18 on: May 27, 2009, 02:45:26 PM »
um... is there  a way to take this thread down?
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« Reply #19 on: May 27, 2009, 03:33:45 PM »
No there is not! You must live with it FOREVERRRRR MUWHAHAHAHA *lightning strikes*

No seriously lol why would u want it off anyway?
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« Reply #20 on: May 27, 2009, 09:44:06 PM »
different reasons.... i would just like it to be taken off if that's possible... :huh:
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Re: Untitled
« Reply #21 on: May 28, 2009, 01:16:48 AM »
So have you decided on a Name for your Manga ? Also hey don't forget to add activity for your story Dialog only wont be good !