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Author Topic: Manga Workshop : Gurren Lagann - Yoko | Another Girl Character  (Read 8480 times)

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Re: Manga Workshop : Gurren Lagann - Yoko | Another Girl Character
« Reply #30 on: August 05, 2012, 02:56:10 AM »
Yoko. Haww~, sexy. ... That and she's fourteen. I love anime, I tell you what.

I've never worked with Manga Studio in depth, so I'm not quite sure of capabilities of the program, but I have a few critiques for you nonetheless.

The eyes usually follow one rule, no matter where they are placed on the head. One eye length apart will fill the distance between the two eyes, usually the largest will be the measuring point. For this picture of Yoko, this rings true. It's a wee bit hard for me to see the details of her right eye, but I believe it is placed a little too high and seems a bit too big. The iris is also a bit large. Her eyes are also facing forward instead of looking at the viewer - but that's not too much of an issue. As for her nose... I... I dunno, you might want to take another look at that.

On her right hand (and I almost didn't catch this first glance), her pinky is a bit too long... and seems to have broken. Take another look at the original photo and do a quick hand comparison - you'll see what I mean right off the bat.

Now, this is the part where I have no idea what I'm talking about due to my lack of knowledge with Manga Studio. The color scheme is a little funky. Her skin and socks, while very close in color, differ and should be distinguished with two types of shading. Perhaps the little dot shading would work, just getting darker, more close fitting dots with the shadows of the sock. Not that big of a deal, but it could help. Also, I do suggest getting a lighter tone on the skin shadows. Again, not much of a big deal, but could improve picture quality. Same would go for the boots, seeing as how they are mainly white.

As for the rest, well done. Dig the way you did the hair and the gun looks spot on. I love weapons.  :sheep:

Hope I helped a bit.
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Re: Manga Workshop : Gurren Lagann - Yoko | Another Girl Character
« Reply #31 on: August 05, 2012, 10:38:54 AM »
Now... A 14 year old with a smexy ecchi body...  *falls on the ground*  :@:

hmmmm... i never saw this thread up until now... so meh ish gonna draw Gurren Girly.  :dance:



EDIT: After many minutes

 :sick: still sick from vehicular motion sickness..... my hands are very off coz me ish so tired. I'll make one better next time.... too.... sleepy....  :sleep:

« Last Edit: August 05, 2012, 11:53:13 AM by AldrichCrescent »

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Re: Manga Workshop : Gurren Lagann - Yoko | Another Girl Character
« Reply #32 on: August 05, 2012, 12:45:24 PM »
Thank you for the constructive comments,  I have gone back to my drawing and fixed the hand, Scarf and socks, so I can tell what they are.  Aldritch your drawing is kick butt!  I see now that the beltbuckle has a panda on it, her hair tie is supposed to be a skull and your hand definantly  is batter than mine.  I had never heard of this charactor before.  Great job.

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Re: Manga Workshop : Gurren Lagann - Yoko | Another Girl Character
« Reply #33 on: August 05, 2012, 01:05:57 PM »
hands were off huh aldrich <.<

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Re: Manga Workshop : Gurren Lagann - Yoko | Another Girl Character
« Reply #34 on: August 05, 2012, 02:32:29 PM »
Nice work, everyone!

@Grump: For toning I recommend using the selection tool and then filling it in. Also, apply the tone on layers below the lineart.

Funny thing, I actually have to draw a picture of Yoko for a commission. But it's Yoko as a sexy pirate xD.

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Re: Manga Workshop : Gurren Lagann - Yoko | Another Girl Character
« Reply #35 on: August 05, 2012, 02:49:04 PM »
*bleeds at the thought*

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Re: Manga Workshop : Gurren Lagann - Yoko | Another Girl Character
« Reply #36 on: August 05, 2012, 05:01:14 PM »
Thanks monsterful, on the next workahop I will try that approach to toning.  I am finding it way easier to copy someone elses work, than to create my own.  I guess if I keep drawing this style I'll eventually find my style for manga?

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Re: Manga Workshop : Gurren Lagann - Yoko | Another Girl Character
« Reply #37 on: August 05, 2012, 05:09:39 PM »
well everyone eventually settles into a style. and it is never really set. it'll always continue evolving.

half of it is your starting point i think. what you're going for. but the other half will just kinda happen whether you want it to or not.

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Re: Manga Workshop : Gurren Lagann - Yoko | Another Girl Character
« Reply #38 on: February 16, 2013, 09:17:22 PM »

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Re: Manga Workshop : Gurren Lagann - Yoko | Another Girl Character
« Reply #39 on: November 11, 2013, 11:05:38 PM »




it needs some work on the face
« Last Edit: November 11, 2013, 11:07:20 PM by plople »

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Re: Manga Workshop : Gurren Lagann - Yoko | Another Girl Character
« Reply #40 on: November 12, 2013, 09:15:54 AM »
Nice one. She looks bendy though, and the right chesticle seems to stick out a bit much... look into http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php/topic,7602.0.html for tips on that.

Perhaps I should try out this workshop as well.

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Re: Manga Workshop : Gurren Lagann - Yoko | Another Girl Character
« Reply #41 on: November 16, 2013, 08:12:50 AM »
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Re: Manga Workshop : Gurren Lagann - Yoko | Another Girl Character
« Reply #42 on: May 15, 2014, 09:35:29 AM »
ill try to give it a shot too haah i think its fun too

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Re: Manga Workshop : Gurren Lagann - Yoko | Another Girl Character
« Reply #43 on: July 11, 2014, 11:08:29 AM »

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Re: Manga Workshop : Gurren Lagann - Yoko | Another Girl Character
« Reply #44 on: July 11, 2014, 11:09:06 AM »
Lovely art, Yukinori!  :clapping: