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Offline Operative13

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Grim Encounter in the Orisian Wild Discussion
« on: June 27, 2015, 06:32:29 PM »
Discuss about Grim Encounter in the Orisian Wild here. If you wish to read the short story, go here:
http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php/topic,13705.msg232744.html#msg232744
« Last Edit: June 27, 2015, 06:49:54 PM by Operative13 »
“To give of oneself is the noblest of all acts.”

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Re: Grim Encounter in the Orisian Wild Discussion
« Reply #1 on: April 06, 2016, 08:30:16 AM »
So I've read the prologue and the first part of the story and I've have to say I'm really impressed with the writing so far. Very vivid and descriptive imagery. Nicely done on that front. I guess the only thing I would say that can be improved upon is maybe adding a tad bit more description to characters' physical appearance? I don't know. You've probably tackled that in later parts, but adding a bit in the beginning wouldn't hurt I guess.

Overall, nicely done so far. I will read the rest when I get a chance.
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Re: Grim Encounter in the Orisian Wild Discussion
« Reply #2 on: April 06, 2016, 11:44:27 AM »
Thanks for the feedback! Although you probably noticed I'm very big on details, for this particular piece, I'm trying to limit details for characters for reasons I've yet to reveal thus far. Until I update the rest of the parts, you might run into questions related to the plot that I may or may not be able to answer, to which I say, patience ;) For now, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as it comes along  ;D
« Last Edit: April 06, 2016, 01:09:31 PM by Operative13 »
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Re: Grim Encounter in the Orisian Wild Discussion
« Reply #3 on: April 12, 2016, 01:10:11 PM »
Got any other pieces of work from this universe you're writing up? These are always entertaining reads

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Re: Grim Encounter in the Orisian Wild Discussion
« Reply #4 on: April 12, 2016, 02:26:04 PM »
I'm working on another piece apart from this one at the moment, but I'll be posting that one all in one go, as opposed to Grim Encounter where I post bits of it a little at a time. I try to write whenever I have free time, as my daily life often take up most of the day, and as the procrastinator I am, I'd rather binge another anime series in that spare time than work on my own stories  :sure: That, and I also have to point out I do proofread and edit my work many, many times before I actually post it online, as I like to be thorough and precise when it comes to writing. That also means it takes way longer than it should to post a small segment, but eh, that's the price you pay for wanting an entertaining plot  ;)
« Last Edit: April 12, 2016, 02:28:03 PM by Operative13 »
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