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Re: Review Swaps
« Reply #60 on: May 10, 2016, 08:17:30 PM »
Hey! I read both chapters and I added some minor edits here and there leave them or taking them is up to you! It's mostly some grammar things I picked up while reading.

Hey Flames117. Since we can't put the critics here I have two options you can put it here Dance of Enb/A Humbles Man Pain Or You can put it at the end of the chapter on Google docs in a comment. I will be answering your critic there on the title page. Thank you for reading.

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Re: Review Swaps
« Reply #61 on: May 10, 2016, 08:20:31 PM »
Hey! I read both chapters and I added some minor edits here and there leave them or taking them is up to you! It's mostly some grammar things I picked up while reading.

Hey Flames117. Since we can't put the critics here I have two options you can put it here Dance of Enb/A Humbles Man Pain Or You can put it at the end of the chapter on Google docs in a comment. I will be answering your critic there on the title page. Thank you for reading.

er alright, I'll just copy pasta what I said there then..
Message me for any assistance you need! I'd be glad to help.

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Re: Review Swaps
« Reply #62 on: May 10, 2016, 08:27:59 PM »
I'd also be interested in review swapping.

Hey AzimuthComics just leave a link to what you want reviewed and tell us how you want it to be reviewed. Use this here as a guide to posting. Request for Review Posting Example , Scroll down to the 13th and 14th Post.

In which I also have to repost and follow this example lol.

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Re: Review Swaps
« Reply #63 on: May 11, 2016, 03:54:33 PM »
Right, then. I'll return the favour to anyone who critiques it.

Title: No True Heroes

Link: http://forums.mangaraiders.com/index.php/topic,16128.0.html

How much to review: The first chapter, it's all that's up so far.

Focus: Full feedback, and brutal honesty. In terms of the science and physics of the world inside, I've done my homework so please make sure you're... Well, right, before critiquing that.




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