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Author Topic: This Raider War Of Mine  (Read 1990 times)

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Offline GingerStark

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Re: This Raider War Of Mine
« Reply #15 on: March 21, 2015, 05:01:58 PM »
What if the Fro was actually Lego, and Michone was just the body?  :-\

I'm glad everyone is liking it though, I'm surprised for a writing exercise such as this  :ohmy:

Lego: The title comes from the game I'm parodying, This War Of Mine! It's on Steam, and my Zeus is it a great game.
Ah, Walking Dead Trauma  ::) Killing your favourite characters and feels at the same time  :sadbye:

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Re: This Raider War Of Mine
« Reply #16 on: March 21, 2015, 11:27:13 PM »
Foolish mortals!  The Fro can survive on its own! In fact it'll out live its host


I hope years from now, when we're all dead and MR has conquered the internet, someone will write a story where the corpse of Lego must be dug up, and it's just a skeleton with an afro.


yeah, that would be the best call back joke ever.

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Re: This Raider War Of Mine
« Reply #17 on: March 22, 2015, 12:57:19 AM »
Foolish mortals!  The Fro can survive on its own! In fact it'll out live its host


I hope years from now, when we're all dead and MR has conquered the internet, someone will write a story where the corpse of Lego must be dug up, and it's just a skeleton with an afro.


yeah, that would be the best call back joke ever.

After I read that line, I was thinking the exact same thing Coryn lol. I was also reminded of Brooks from One Piece, which validates Lego's statement about the fro outliving it's host pretty well.

Oh and almost forgot the important part...giving feedback on Ginger's story!! So I didn't get through all of it but I liked what I had read. I'm intrigued about the loot that Echo stole/took and Lego's suspicious behavior makes you think that something's going on behind the scenes. I'm curious to find out what happens next.
« Last Edit: March 22, 2015, 01:08:31 AM by God Usopp »
The world is a dangerous place to live; not because of the people who are evil, but because of the people who don't do anything about it.

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Re: This Raider War Of Mine
« Reply #18 on: March 22, 2015, 01:10:21 AM »
I do feel vastly inferior due to not inheriting the fro from my old man  >:( Got this damn beautiful long straight black hair *slo mo hair flick*

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Re: This Raider War Of Mine
« Reply #19 on: March 22, 2015, 01:15:07 AM »
-slow motion hair flick of glossy-neon-purple hair that extends nearly six feet-

"Aoooooot... raaaaaaaaaay..... juuuuhhsssssssssss..." <- Slow Motion

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Re: This Raider War Of Mine
« Reply #20 on: March 22, 2015, 01:59:36 AM »
Oh gawd

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« Reply #21 on: March 22, 2015, 02:08:35 AM »
Hahaha I lol'd irl.

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Re: This Raider War Of Mine
« Reply #22 on: March 25, 2015, 11:47:52 AM »
Haha, we might as well sponser Legomaestro's fro as our website mascot  :D

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