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Author Topic: A Game of Raiders (An MR Parody)  (Read 4609 times)

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Re: A Game of Raiders (An MR Parody)
« Reply #15 on: January 10, 2015, 08:35:51 PM »
Oh? What am I involved in? *Starts reading ch.1*

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Re: A Game of Raiders (An MR Parody)
« Reply #16 on: January 10, 2015, 08:36:38 PM »
Small to start of with I'm afraid  :hmm: it'll expand soon enough  :thumbsup:

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« Reply #17 on: January 10, 2015, 08:51:14 PM »
-Assistant Vio, the kawaii, well intentioned assistant to Lorenx

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“That’s fine” Lorenx replied bluntly “Now, I’d like to introduce my personal assistant, Vio”

A small blonde boy creeped out behind Lorenx, an aura of innocence and youth beaming out of every orifice.

huh.

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Re: A Game of Raiders (An MR Parody)
« Reply #18 on: January 10, 2015, 08:53:41 PM »
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Re: A Game of Raiders (An MR Parody)
« Reply #19 on: January 10, 2015, 08:55:17 PM »
So will there be choices for the player, or is this just a "sit back and watch" story? :hmm:

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Re: A Game of Raiders (An MR Parody)
« Reply #20 on: January 10, 2015, 08:56:02 PM »
Sit back and watch I suppose  :hmm: Though I'm willing to listen to suggestions...

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Re: A Game of Raiders (An MR Parody)
« Reply #21 on: January 10, 2015, 08:59:37 PM »
Awww shucks. No planning cloak and dagger tactics for me than.

I can't wait for chapter 3 . ^^

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« Reply #22 on: January 10, 2015, 09:01:51 PM »
Ehhh, you'll get a sharp lesson in politics soon enough ;)

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Re: A Game of Raiders (An MR Parody)
« Reply #23 on: January 10, 2015, 10:19:29 PM »
man oh man. games of thrones hmm. will wait and see how this goes yes yes.

some mistakes that a little editing would clear up, but looks pretty good!


Though you seem to have some grand designs there chief. We're going to need a lot of anthologies

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Re: A Game of Raiders (An MR Parody)
« Reply #24 on: January 10, 2015, 10:40:39 PM »
Daaaaaaaamnnnn son!

While I'm not so sure I'd be so cruel to a little beggar the goofball act is pretty good  :tongue:

Very entertaining anyhoo! Now just half expecting someone to randomly be killed off!
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Re: A Game of Raiders (An MR Parody)
« Reply #25 on: January 11, 2015, 07:30:03 AM »
Coryn: I'm glad you like it :D Just how big can it go I wonder...

I'll try to read back though it and clear the spelling errors. If people could point any out, I'd most grateful :D

No1sey: You're the star of the show my friend  :santa: Though so was Ned Stark... keep your fingers crossed!

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Re: A Game of Raiders (An MR Parody)
« Reply #26 on: January 11, 2015, 07:36:36 AM »
Dammit Ginger those foreboding words are not cool!  :sadbye:

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Re: A Game of Raiders (An MR Parody)
« Reply #27 on: January 11, 2015, 07:48:59 AM »
Wow Ginger...
This is pure awesomeness!
I started smiling from the very first lines and Im still smiling writing this reply!
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I don't create stories, I relive them ;)
I'm in development of one right now, so please check it out:
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If you want me to check out YOUR story,  just PM me.

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Re: A Game of Raiders (An MR Parody)
« Reply #28 on: January 11, 2015, 08:39:20 AM »
No1sey:  :santa: :santa: :santa: Stay tuned...

Liuxess: Thank you :D I'm glad you liked it!

Stay tuned for chapter 3 folks! Coming today...

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Re: A Game of Raiders (An MR Parody)
« Reply #29 on: January 11, 2015, 09:21:52 AM »
This is amazing XD I actually laughed out loud reading this
Keep going! Everyone wants to read the next chapter :D