As you are in the UK you know this immeadiatly sounds like Judge Dredd from British comic 2000 AD. Told from Hershey's(?) Anderson's (?) point of view? I do not know the comic that well.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9rVFi6qkPHE (I am the law).
now lets shred some stuff. I feel mean today so I'm putting on my mean pants, my mean hat, my mean clown nose, and my mean fright wig. Now.. time to be mean.
starting with the name "Reaper Division"
Could you get more cliche? "Death Patrol'? nope. "The Peacemakers" ugg.
Besides, you already know real world spin, the horrible people would get a nice friendly sounding name like Civilian Relations Dept, Loyalty and Patriotism Division, Citizen Protection Agency. You give them a PR dept approved name and you can maybe get away with disillusioned citizens referring to them as "Reapers", "Reaper Squad" "Reaper Division", "Corpse Makers", "death bringers", "Violent Bob's Murder Patrol", whatever.
in 2070.. well oil is projected to run out in ~2040 and it will take 100 years for a substitute to show up so maybe not 2070? 30 years with no oil should have the pollution and population greatly reduced (pollution will spike in the first few years as people burn everything they can for warmth and will then greatly drop as 6 billion dead people quit polluting and the rains begin to clean the pollution out of the air and into the sea and soil)... Not to mention world wars will be impossible.
An oxygen recycling plant.. Umm, why? Because it sounded futuristic and advanced? If you need something to free O2 from sea water you have a dead planet as far as animals are concerned. I assume it is liberating O2 from sea water (not drinking water) and not trying to "recycle" it.
~Since a world war III occured, you need to think about all high-tech weapons. Not scifi weapons but still much more advanced than ours, cuz with the technology we have, weapon upgrades during a war would boost ten times. So maybe war machines like from ironman would be possible in your story
Nope.nope nope.
Our main use of force is about the same as in Vietnam 50 years ago. When WW3 goes down, everything will be about the same. If you want teh US to have replaced its infantry with drones well that is a horror story of a different sort more akin to Screamers? (Peter Weller movie with autonomous killbots). The US spends almost all the military money on the planet. I think the UK is in 2nd place with 1/3 of the US's spending? or was it 1/5? The US gets the cool toys and the other side gets killed. In the future we will have soldiers there simply because robots make lousy heroes (this only happens when bots are cheaper than humans, and/or a corp gets tax payers to demand bots after pushing out sad news stories showing dead US troops).
~You should have the mc have a rival within the reapers- a guy or a girl that enjoy killing, and that being the reason they joined the reapers
2 issues:
1. horrifically cliche'
2. While those sort of people will be drawn to the job, the psych tests to keep people like that out of the street judges would be crazy hard to beat and then not getting reported (or executed by a fellow judge) if you beat the test, would also be stupid rough.
3. Rival for rookie.. Yeah. people don't really tend to have rivals in real life very often. Maybe a rival for a position and that is settled once one person gets the position. Generally a rival means competing for something. Seriously, who are your rivals?
~What does church say about the death penalty? There could be a group of people within the church who are exterminating the reapers as a protest against the death penalty.
1. The church has been gleefully killing guilty and innocent alike for 2 thousand years, they are not turning against the death penalty when it is most popular.
2. In a starving post-ww3 world the mob AKA humanity loves killing those they perceive as guilty, the church always plays to the mob. Why do you think Matthew 6 is never talked about in church?
3. Going after people who can legally kill you is foolish at best and can't be done on a small scale. Full out insurrection would be required.
~If you make a guy who kills for fun and the group within the Church, the guy could defend the mc from the group and inspire some romance.
Just no. Please no.
Brannon Braga or Rick Berman might write that but not the rest of us.
Thank you for your feedback liuxess
I do hope to serve the Death Penalty as an interesting topic of debate among readers, which should engage them more into the story
World War three would bring about technological advancement and a change in global politics, which will require a great deal of thought when possible
Street judges will not get much debate about the right and wrong of the death penalty. This has already been demonstrated by Judge Dredd.
WWIII however will take place primarily in South America (Especially the Falkland Islands) and Europe (Which is fighting a civil war amongst itself)
That is not a WW III. That is a bum fight that most of the world fails to care about after the first week of watching stuff go pop on TV.
Seriously, Europe fights and no one plays the "Lets call America" card? No one plays the "We used to be a BLOC nation and we could use some help, Borris" card? Not even when they are losing?
South America?? what is their motivation? Not enough feathers for Carnival?
The Falklands.. Um, didn't they get taken over by sheep or something in the 80s? Talk about least relevant place on earth.
How we will get WW3 is less pretty than that. People will keep breeding until the oil noticeably begins to run out. As the oil runs out food runs out, can't grow it or move it to cities. Hungry people make bad decisions.
When the oil seems to be running seriously short, the resource wars will begin (well they already have but they will get serious). The US will be big dog claiming all the oil it can. High populace countries of India and China will be desperate for oil (china less so due to currently investing in solar and researching thorium reactors. I believe India is also researching the reactors). Funny thing is most of the fuel claimed during the war will be used to fight the war. In the end most soldiers will not even make it home from wherever they went to go kill for oil. The US as it and everyone else will glass some other countries.
Starvation sets in around the world (cities getting hit the worst) first people start killing their neighbors for their food.. then they start killing their neighbors for food.
This sounds grim but on the bright side, scientists currently say that they should be able to come up with a working substitute for gas 100 years after it runs out (runs out is roughly 2040, I'm not sure if frakking has pushed that much).
So only around 6 billion people will die in the collapse.
Indeed! Sometimes it's obvious, such as armed robbery or hostages. But when it's something like an unproved murderer running away from them, what do you do?
I did some research in England, surprisingly more people are in favor of it being reinstated than opposed. Of course the EU Human Rights forbid this at the moment. However, if the future was different such as England drifting away from the EU and more like the US, change could happen as well as public pressure if people fail to see justice being delivered to extreme criminals (And overpopulated prisons too).
It'll be dark and gritty of course, though you can some comedy and light hearted moments from the cast when they interact with each other.
I had some core characters envisioned from the start including;
-An elderly American who is looking forward to retirement. He provides historical context sometimes "Back in my day we did this..." and ect.
Retire to the UK after WW 3? Not the Bahamas? Not a pacific island either, not even in a cabin near a prime fishing lake in the northern US. That guy must really love rain and boiled food.
-An aloof war veteran who lost his individuality during service. He acts as the male protagonist and doesn't see things in a morality view.
This person does not exist. I know tons of veterans. none "Lose their personality due to the service". No one ever says "I must have left my personality in my other pants". Now if he got shot in the head in the service, a brain injury could explain that.
-Their leader, a former lawyer who often directs the squad and helps maintain their public image, despite the stress it brings her.
Why would a lawyer give up years of school and a good paying job to become a street judge?
Does anyone know which American state has the least strict gun laws?
Many states are gun friendly AZ is one of the ones at the most free point. CA and MA are the least free.
Removing restrictions? As in making guns more accessible?
IN almost every state you can go buy one. in some there is a short waiting period on hand guns that can be bypassed by showing you carry permit or permit to buy.
I see I see Just needed the info because I wanted to split the USA into several factions for the story, and really wanted to have this group of Southern states who make their money off of gun manufacturing and ect. Forget about oil, lead is the new gold for these folks
With CNC and 3D printed guns now.. Yeah, states will not be involved in gun manufacture as right now you can make an AR 15 in you house in a short amount of time (google CNC gunsmithing or printable guns).
States will make their money off of what they have always made it.. people via Taxes. A state going directly into business has more problems than you want to think about.
Also keep in mind that when writers split up the US they usually end up with something dumb. TX might one day leave and there are lots of states that America might want to get rid of but no large group wants to leave and quit being "Merikuns!".