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Daniel The Dimension Guardian.
« on: December 01, 2014, 06:58:52 AM »

Summary of Daniel: The Guardian


Join the Daniel Butz the last Human in his dimension but unbeknownst to him. That his journey is just about to beginning to his fate of become The Greatest Dimension Guardian Ever. He have to survive different dimensions. Due to an evil troll group put DNAs of the creatures of Fantasy and more into him. Now Daniel can change into the any of the creatures that he was injected with. The only problem is that he'd can't control it. He also becomes the Most Dimensional Wanted in every dimensions. He's wanted for two reasons. One reasons is for his death and the other reason is ask him to help them. Cause he's cunning, creativity and Imagination. Few other reasons as well like being force to be married to someone.


Author's Note: Who inspired me to do created this story: Disney, Marvel, DC and Amalgam. Naruto was the one who inspired me to making it into a Manga.

Side note: If these moderators want to be a character in my story. I'll glad to make them one.
Meastro, Coryn & Hasith.

 
« Last Edit: December 01, 2014, 08:50:45 AM by Dangerous8 »

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Re: Daniel The Dimension Guardian.
« Reply #1 on: December 01, 2014, 10:39:50 AM »
I remember that somewhere you said that the different dimensions are going to be drawn in different styles, so are you looking for multiple artists?

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Re: Daniel The Dimension Guardian.
« Reply #2 on: December 01, 2014, 11:49:21 AM »
I remember that somewhere you said that the different dimensions are going to be drawn in different styles, so are you looking for multiple artists?

Yeah I am. I'm trying get a group together with my Job Coach.

My Job Coach is husband owns 5 Judo Dojos.  One in West Chester, Ohio. 

First off. I'm a christian. Do you have probably with that?

I'm trying mix Manga and Christians.

How Christians see themselves as Outsiders. That's why I'd decide to make a Dimensional base Manga.

The only two requirements are this:

1.They never work with any body that work with Kishimoto on Naruto.
2. They have to show me a Drawing they did before I accept them as one of my artist.
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Re: Daniel The Dimension Guardian.
« Reply #3 on: December 01, 2014, 12:16:59 PM »
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Yeah I am. I'm trying get a group together with my Job Coach.

My Job Coach is husband owns 5 Judo Dojos.  One in West Chester, Ohio. 

First off. I'm a christian. Do you have probably with that?

I'm trying mix Manga and Christians.

How Christians see themselves as Outsiders. That's why I'd decide to make a Dimensional base Manga.

The only two requirements are this:

1.They never work with any body that work with Kishimoto on Naruto.
2. They have to show me a Drawing they did before I accept them as one of my artist.
I was asking in order to give you some advice. Before looking for the artists you should find someone who can storyboard your comic, so that the different artists use the same paneling style. It would also help if he/she was willing and able to rewrite the dialogue and such since you say you have speech problems.

I don't have any problem with religion, although I am not religious myself.

You likely won't find anyone who has worked with Kishimoto on this forum.

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Re: Daniel The Dimension Guardian.
« Reply #4 on: December 01, 2014, 12:33:53 PM »
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Yeah I am. I'm trying get a group together with my Job Coach.

My Job Coach is husband owns 5 Judo Dojos.  One in West Chester, Ohio. 

First off. I'm a christian. Do you have probably with that?

I'm trying mix Manga and Christians.

How Christians see themselves as Outsiders. That's why I'd decide to make a Dimensional base Manga.

The only two requirements are this:

1.They never work with any body that work with Kishimoto on Naruto.
2. They have to show me a Drawing they did before I accept them as one of my artist.
I was asking in order to give you some advice. Before looking for the artists you should find someone who can storyboard your comic, so that the different artists use the same paneling style. It would also help if he/she was willing and able to rewrite the dialogue and such since you say you have speech problems.

I don't have any problem with religion, although I am not religious myself.

You likely won't find anyone who has worked with Kishimoto on this forum.


Thanks for your help. I'm also looking for an Editor. That's why I'm trying to make a group.

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« Reply #5 on: December 01, 2014, 12:46:38 PM »
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Thanks for your help. I'm also looking for an Editor. That's why I'm trying to make a group.
You're welcome. Good luck on your comic and finding members.

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« Reply #6 on: December 01, 2014, 01:01:30 PM »
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Thanks for your help. I'm also looking for an Editor. That's why I'm trying to make a group.
You're welcome. Good luck on your comic and finding members.

Do you mind if I can use you as a character?

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« Reply #7 on: December 01, 2014, 01:02:39 PM »
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Do you mind if I can use you as a character?
What kind of character?

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« Reply #8 on: December 01, 2014, 01:19:33 PM »
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Do you mind if I can use you as a character?
What kind of character?

Anything actually that's one reason. I have different dimensions.

A guide of sorta:

Here's the dimensions:

8 Our World
16 trolls
24  Ninjas
32 Fighters
40 Princesses (Daniel's first girlfriend. )
48  Romans
56  Pirates
64 Centaurs
72 Spartans
80 Toons
88 Knights
96 Bible times
104 Samurais
112 Knights
120 Nazi
128  Reverse Dimension (Daniel's future wife comes from.)

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« Reply #9 on: December 01, 2014, 05:02:42 PM »
Shin Daiki=Naruto
Seiichi Michi=Kishimoto
Lance Stee=Stan Lee
Max Sickson=Marclom Wheeler the creator of the DC.
Wally Ranger=Walt Disney.

Mutant Mouse=Mickey Mouse.
Dancing Man=Spiderman
Misfits Extreme Nature=X-Men
Dangerous Man=Batman
Dashing Man=Superman
Rabenda Shai=Hinata but more ugly. She stalks my main character does the same thing that Talia Al Ghul did to Batman.
Riru Kurieita the King of the Trolls the father of Rabenda Shai= Kishimoto.
Norio Shiro=Old Naruto type of character.

My lesson from Norio Shiro is that you can't bottle up you emotion. Soon they'll exploded at the worse time as well.
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Re: Daniel The Dimension Guardian.
« Reply #10 on: December 01, 2014, 10:32:59 PM »
You see.....the idea starts to fall apart when you try to categorize a specific group.

I dont think you need "dimensions" because the way you describe it doesn't appear to be taking the full potential of the word "dimensions". FOr example: Ninja, Roman, Knights, Bible Times and all that had existed in our world. And it makes things really confusing. Why have Ninjas and Samurais in separate dimensions?

Then you have a Nazi world too....its just not consistent and hard to take serious. it's all raw fantasy, but not enough to make a solid story.
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Re: Daniel The Dimension Guardian.
« Reply #11 on: December 01, 2014, 10:52:49 PM »
what i understand from the information that you give, is that you want to make a manga with alot of diff world and drawing style, that give people like seeing alot of diff manga in 1 manga.
and alot of well know char in those world , in another world like kingdom heart in a way.

i don't think the idea is a problem here, i think the real problem will be you, as in your writing skill is.... well let put it as not good for making a manga.
and you will not be able to get so many good artist to work for you unless you pay.  if is no pay, only low lever artist will come and help you and i am sure that will be very bad..... many weird drawing will come out......

so if you really want to make this manga you will really have to think, what price you willing to pay , how much money and how much time. if your plan is just no money and very little time then i will say it can't be done.

if is $0 and alot of time, then i will say you need to improve your way of writing, try to make it easy for other to understand your story, then maybe some good artist will help you base on a good writing skill and story.

if is alot of money well, just hire some 1 to help you to make.
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Re: Daniel The Dimension Guardian.
« Reply #12 on: December 01, 2014, 10:57:27 PM »
Kingdom Hearts at least is consistent in the idea of all being disney worlds. but these "dimensions" are based on real-world things. So its like we have our dimension, and a separate dimension that makes all these other things alternate history, which might sound ok, if it was consistent in design (like Kingdom Hearts)
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« Reply #13 on: December 02, 2014, 01:03:11 AM »
kingdom hearts not just Disney worlds char, also got Square Enix char or final fantasy char(can't remember too well )
also their own kingdom heart char.
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« Reply #14 on: December 02, 2014, 04:44:33 AM »
But kh had a consistent pattern to using square enix characters and kh original characters. The entire basis of KH is going to multiple worlds we are already familiar with.


Here though the world design is random and they are dimensions, not worlds. It makes it even more difficult.
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