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Offline Vio

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Re: My "Pictures"
« Reply #30 on: April 14, 2014, 10:57:57 PM »
My first hand drawn picture!  :dance:

Meet Demo, a female character from "Project: A.N.G.E.L.S."

Need to work on her short hair. Otherwise,  :thumbsup:.


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Re: My "Pictures"
« Reply #31 on: April 15, 2014, 04:08:38 AM »
Cheek line is wrong, as is the ear positioning.

Perhaps draw the full head next time, so that you can properly measure proportions.

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« Reply #32 on: April 15, 2014, 02:55:43 PM »
Thanks for you comment Jamie ^^.

The cheek line and ear are drawn incorrectly. The originally length of her hair from the side was down to her nose. But I wanted to try and draw an ear. So, I erased parts of her hair and "fix" her cheek line. The ear needs to be a lot bigger and raised higher.

At my artistic level, drawing the full head is a daunting task and dose not come out as neat. Instead, I focused on more up-close and pay attention to the facial details. I'm slowly zooming out and working on other facial features, such as the cheek line and ears  ;).

Again, thank you for you comment.  ;D 

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Re: My "Pictures"
« Reply #33 on: April 15, 2014, 03:14:13 PM »
Sometimes you have to dive into the deep end Vio. The best way to improve in art is to just start doing it. Goes for heads, the other eye, full bodies, hands, and feet.

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« Reply #34 on: April 15, 2014, 03:35:19 PM »
OH, don't worry Coryn. I practise the whole body. I'll see if can upload a few pictures for laug- I mean comparison.  ;)

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Re: My "Pictures"
« Reply #35 on: April 15, 2014, 09:57:09 PM »
Tomboy Demo again ^^.

Little upset that the shading on her face didn't come out. I guess tracing paper does that. :/.


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« Reply #36 on: April 16, 2014, 12:38:30 PM »
Out of curiosity do you use guide lines when making the head? To me it seems the sides of the head are out farther than they should be

Other than that you were better than me when I started drawing heads *shivers* that was a dark time
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« Reply #37 on: April 16, 2014, 12:42:55 PM »
Once again, I drew Demo, she's slowly get to my ideal image of her ^^. She's roughly about 42% complete  :thumbsup:.

For something different, I tried to sketch and shade Misaka Mikoto from the To Aru Kagaku series. Hope you guys like it  ;).

Demo and Misaka
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« Reply #38 on: April 16, 2014, 12:50:37 PM »
Out of curiosity do you use guide lines when making the head? To me it seems the sides of the head are out farther than they should be

Other than that you were better than me when I started drawing heads *shivers* that was a dark time

Yeah, I'm starting learn how to use guide lines for the head. You're not wrong, her head is still not correctly shape.

Oh, I've only been practising the heads for roughly 2 weeks now. When I started everyone of my characters had block heads  :glare:
« Last Edit: April 16, 2014, 12:59:42 PM by Vio »

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« Reply #39 on: April 16, 2014, 12:59:56 PM »
Nobody's beginning guide line heads probably look as bad as mine did. Uh, which guide line "version" (there are so many different guide lines for heads) are you using?
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« Reply #40 on: April 16, 2014, 01:13:35 PM »
ATM, I'm using this guideline: http://www.ratemydrawings.com/tutorials/manga/973-How_to_draw_manga_especially_shoujo_manga_faces.html

I just keep botching up the cheek and chin line >.<.

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« Reply #41 on: April 16, 2014, 02:19:11 PM »

here is the basic head shape I use (sorry for the crappy quality of the picture)
I put the eyes higher on the head though whenever I draw but every differs in style
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« Reply #42 on: April 16, 2014, 02:27:07 PM »
Thanks everlastin01! I'll give it a shot right now ;D.
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« Reply #43 on: April 16, 2014, 02:31:21 PM »
I will tell you now you are going to need a bunch of reference pictures. (I am giving you advice I wish I was given at the very beginning)
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« Reply #44 on: April 16, 2014, 02:45:27 PM »
Here we are! Thank you for the advise. I really do appreciate  it ^^.