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My "Pictures"
« on: April 07, 2014, 12:50:59 PM »
I have just finished this picture on MS Paint and was hoping what everyone thinks of it? I appreciate any kind of feedback!  ;D

This picture is related to one of my stories called "Project: A.N.G.E.L.S." This character is one of main protagonists. As I am still learning how to draw human figures and facial expressions, I decided to show his eye, a bit of hair, and some mysterious object blocking his face. *gasp!*

I'm hoping to draw my characters by hand. Once they all stop looking like prepubescent boys, I'll be sure to share them to MR!

There are a few mistakes here and there I'll try to fix in the future. Biggest one for me are the shadows. overall, I love it  ;)


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Re: My "Pictures"
« Reply #1 on: April 07, 2014, 05:13:45 PM »
this was with paint.... D: holy cow that looks cool
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« Reply #2 on: April 07, 2014, 06:19:51 PM »
Thank you very much everlastin01! I really appreciate it.  ;D

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« Reply #3 on: April 07, 2014, 06:26:11 PM »
I know that paint takes a lot of practice to master.
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« Reply #4 on: April 07, 2014, 06:32:07 PM »
I'm just starting to use it. Takes some patient too... Kept cursing at the curve tool after 14-ish failed attempts making the eye.  >:(

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« Reply #5 on: April 07, 2014, 06:42:26 PM »
this is why I switched to gimp (free software that is better than paint lol)
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« Reply #6 on: April 07, 2014, 06:53:28 PM »
I'm looking a few art tools like gimp to see what would be a better alternative. Right now in between gimp and pixia.

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« Reply #7 on: April 07, 2014, 06:54:30 PM »
never heard of pixie...I got addicted to gimp because of school
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« Reply #8 on: April 07, 2014, 07:01:03 PM »
With the reviews, it seems that gimp beats pixia by a full point. Gimp stays around 3-4 out of 5, and pixia rates are around 3 out of 5.  :glare:

Never used gimp at school. All my school had was Photoshop, and I didn't really care for it at the time.

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« Reply #9 on: April 07, 2014, 08:14:31 PM »
your school was lucky...
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« Reply #10 on: April 07, 2014, 08:37:25 PM »
Oh? I apologize if I'm trending on thin ice.  :(

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« Reply #11 on: April 07, 2014, 08:43:57 PM »
nah you good  :tongue:
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« Reply #12 on: April 07, 2014, 08:47:52 PM »
Well that's good to here ;).

I didn't like my high school that much. When I was moving from grade 8 to 9, I had a choice between 3 schools. The high school I pick was one of the worst decisions I have ever made in my life.

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« Reply #13 on: April 08, 2014, 01:44:49 AM »
Here is my second character from "Project: A.N.G.E.L.S." He is one my favourite characters I made so far.  ;D

Next time I want to tone the face enough to bring out the bridge of his noise. I didn't do that for 2 reasons: 1) I'm not really sure how to tone it correctly. 2) 1:30 A.M. and I want to go to sleep...

I have yet to decided what colour his eyes should be, so I just draw them closed.

As always, please leave feedback and criticism so I may strengthen my skills.

Thank you very much!

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« Reply #14 on: April 08, 2014, 11:25:05 PM »
Hello everyone!

This time I wanted to draw a scenery, again from my story "Project: A.N.G.E.L.S.,"  yet I had made a few mistakes. :push:

The biggest mistake was making the vanishing point WAY too low... causing a large, child's height room.  :glare: I did not realize my mistake until I tried to make a couch. Well, had to say goodbye to the couch and put in the table instead.  :sadbye:

I apologies for the lack of material in the lounge area; I'm still deciding what to place in there.

As for the kitchen, I think it's ok. The wall colour, though, needs to be change.

I'll try better next time and be sure the vanishing point is in the right spot! 

Thanks!  ;D

« Last Edit: April 09, 2014, 10:05:56 AM by Vio »