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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #975 on: February 17, 2018, 12:15:37 PM »
:dance: Yay~ Thanks man. ^^ Glad for the help.

Yeah, I won't be the Flash fast at this either. There're buffer zones.

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #976 on: February 17, 2018, 12:19:33 PM »
No problem. I'm not sure what stage this project is in considering characters and designs, but PM anytime when we're ready to move foreword with colouring.

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #977 on: February 17, 2018, 06:18:01 PM »
Keep that foot down Echo!

Honestly I don't think any one  could be more "canon" than the next. And I'm sure Lego is more than willing to have to take point.

But more to the point: you have Writer and Ecchi-tan sprites?!?!!! Please share!

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #978 on: February 18, 2018, 07:10:24 PM »
Stuck to the ground now.

Well, these were done some time ago, so it's older style. You might have seen them before. They could be redone or revamped if needed.

From the Character Art folder:

Ecchi-Tan: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0ByfqHGQGkPH7LVRfby04b3JfQ1E
Writer-Tan: https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0ByfqHGQGkPH7aFNkT3ZtMk8taEU

And I test linearted the Vacant sketch (Changed the hair a little). I think it came out a little stiff.
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« Reply #979 on: February 18, 2018, 08:29:58 PM »
I definitely remember seeing some rough sketches of these. They look really good in color! I like Ecchi-tan's hair a lot as well.

I wouldn't worry about redoing them. Let's just concentrate on getting something out the gate for each character. Keeps things simple.
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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #980 on: February 19, 2018, 11:00:49 AM »
Jesus, these look amazing Echo! This project is coming along nicely indeed.

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« Reply #981 on: February 19, 2018, 01:59:06 PM »
(finally gets around to looking at the Vacant sketch)

Maybe a little stiff, but just being a VAN sprite, it's not super important for him to be super active looking. I might suggest adding some scruff to his face though. Might help him stand out a little.

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« Reply #982 on: February 19, 2018, 10:37:11 PM »
You certainly capture Vacant's cheekiness. :thumbsup:


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« Reply #983 on: February 20, 2018, 12:16:10 PM »
@Coryn Thanks. ^^ Alright, guess we'll hold on to them then!

Scruff.... okay.  :unsure: Aaaaa face nemeses: glasses and facial hair. I shall conquer!

@Fro Thanks! XD

@Vio Haha, thanks. :D Now you make me think... that bag could be decorated a little, lol.

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #984 on: February 23, 2018, 10:51:13 PM »
Fixed up Vacant line art a bit. I think it's better.

Vio and I think it might work better to add the "scruff" on during the colouring stage.

Faceless and face versions.

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« Reply #985 on: February 23, 2018, 11:33:59 PM »
I'd agree with that assessment. Good luck!

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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #986 on: February 24, 2018, 10:15:09 AM »
For Vacant's "scruffy" look, are we going for stubbles and whiskers for facial hair, or are we going for his full-man beard look? :hmm:
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« Reply #987 on: February 24, 2018, 11:31:54 AM »
I was going to suggest a sort of Kyoraku of Bleach fame look to it.

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« Reply #988 on: February 24, 2018, 11:37:31 AM »
So kind of hatchet whiskers style, huh? :hmm:


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Re: MR Visual Novels
« Reply #989 on: February 24, 2018, 11:42:56 AM »
Yeah, that would get it across the easiest I'd think.

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